Choice problem, please help ASAP!

[metju]

Hi! So I’m in the midst of writing a story, and I ran into a problem with my script. I want the reader to choose whether or not they want to customise the main character, and I can’t get it to work. Please help!

[AlexandraD]

NARR
Do you want to customise your character?
choice
“Yes”{
goto cc_mc
}“No”{
goto continue_story
}

label cc_mc
#CC TEMPLATE HERE#

label continue_story
#STORY GOES HERE#

[Winteronepisode]

Can you send a picture of your script?

[metju]

[Winteronepisode]

Can you show me the beginning of the choice :)?

[metju]

Sure.

[metju]

[Winteronepisode]

Ah! It’s because you can’t use labels within a choice. You’ll need to send the readers to the customization scene using a label outside a bracket. Similarly to what Alexandra said.

Here’s what your script could look like:

     NARRATOR
Would you like to change how Matthew looks?
choice (customization)
<GEMS:15>"Yes!"{
goto customize
}"No."{
     MATTHEW (idle_sit_neutral_loop_rear)
I actually don't want to change anything.

     HAIRDRESSER (talk_neutral_loop_rear)
That's okay honey.
Remember, you can always change your mind,
And come back.
goto start_episode
}

label customize
INT. HAIRDRESSER WALL with HAIRDRESSER MIRROR to 3.250 -468 -990 in zone 1

@MATTHEW spot 2.883 171 -762 in zone 1

#INSERT TEMPLATE HERE STARTING FROM "label boy_custom_1"

goto start_episode

label start_episode
#YOUR CHAPTER CONTENTS HERE.

[metju]

Ah I didn’t know that.

But now it says this.

[Winteronepisode]

Line 2130 add a pause for 0.

@pause for 0

[metju]

Oh my god it finally works! Thank you so much!!!