Can somebody help please? I’m trying to put this choice within a choice and it’s giving me an error. Here’s my script.
(The main choices are “We’re going home!” and “We just came from using the bathroom.” The other choices are the choices within the first choice)
Script
MS TAYLOR (talk_think_neutral)
Why are you two ladies roaming around by yourselves?
choice [timed:12]
“We’re going home!” {
JEWELS (talk_shrug_concerned)
We have an early dismissal, so we’re going home!
readerMessage She’s getting suspicious…
MS TAYLOR (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
Why are you going home without your bookbags?
@pause for 1
JEWELS (idle_awkward_scratch_loop)
(Oh god…)
choice [timed:12]
“I mean Rose is going home… I need help going back to the Art Room, I don’t remember where it was.” {
JEWELS (talk_armsraised_neutral)
I mean Rose is going home… I need help going back to the Art Room, I don’t remember where it was.
MS TAYLOR (talk_explain_neutral)
Why are you in the Art Room? I dropped you guys off at Music class.
readerMessage Game Over 
JEWELS (idle_awkward_scratch_loop)
Erm…
MS TAYLOR (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
Okay, enough with the lies you to. You’re skipping class and the consequences of skipping class is detention.
&MS TAYLOR is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@JEWELS is deepbreath AND ROSE is deepbreath
ROSE
My mom is going to kill me.
MS TAYLOR (talk_shrug_concerned)
I’m sorry, it’s the school rules not mine. I wish I could let you off the hook.
MS TAYLOR (talk_armsraised_neutral)
Please come with me.
@MS TAYLOR walks to spot 0.123 194 620 in zone 5 in 2 AND JEWELS walks to spot 0.112 193 614 in zone 5 in zone 5 in 2.4 AND ROSE walks to spot 0.112 193 614 in zone 5 in 2.7
@pause for 1
@MS TAYLOR spot 0.912 147 244 in zone 1 AND ROSE spot 0.912 147 244 in zone 1 AND JEWELS spot 0.912 147 244 in zone 1
@pause for 1
NARRATOR (SAMONE)
Game over 
NARRATOR (SAMONE)
Do you wish to try again?
choice
GEMS:5 “Yes” {
NARRATOR (SAMONE)
Great 
Don’t get caught this time!
goto label game_start
}
} “No” {
NARRATOR (SAMONE)
Alright 
goto label detention_ending
}
} “You’re right, we didn’t want to get embarressed because we don’t know our way around the school, we’re looking for the way back to Music Class.” {
JEWELS (talk_shrug_concerned)
You’re right, we didn’t want to get embarressed because we don’t know our way around the school, we’re looking for the way back to Music Class
readerMessage That was a close one! 
@MS TAYLOR is laugh_chuckle
MS TAYLOR (talk_armsraised_neutral)
You guys don’t have to be embarrassed! You’re kindergarters it’s ok.
MS TAYLOR (talk_explain_neutral)
Just go down that hall right there then keep straight alright?
JEWELS (talk_greet_neutral)
Okay, thanks Ms. Taylor!
@MS TAYLOR is talk_greet_neutral
@MS TAYLOR walks to spot 0.912 148 179 in zone 4 AND JEWELS faces left THEN JEWELS is deepbreath
JEWELS (talk_pointup_pretentious)
That was a close one!
ROSE (talk_awkward_loop)
Let’s just keep going.
@ROSE walks to spot 0.121 205 615 in zone 5 AND ROSE is run_super_speed_loop AND JEWELS walks to spot 0.112 193 614 in zone 5 AND JEWELS is run_super_speed_loop
@pause for 1
@JEWELS spot 0.112 102 491 in zone 4
@ROSE spot 0.112 102 491 in zone 4
}
}“We just came from using the bathroom.” {
JEWELS (talk_shrug_concerned)
We just came from using the bathroom.
MS TAYLOR (talk_think_neutral)
Oh, Okay. Well hurry up and get back to class before you miss something!
@MS TAYLOR is talk_greet_neutral AND JEWELS is talk_greet_neutral
@MS TAYLOR walks to spot 0.912 148 179 in zone 4 AND JEWELS faces left
JEWELS (talk_shrug_neutral)
Cmon.
@ROSE walks to spot 0.121 205 615 in zone 5 AND ROSE is run_super_speed_loop AND JEWELS walks to spot 0.112 193 614 in zone 5 AND JEWELS is run_super_speed_loop
@pause for 1
@JEWELS spot 0.112 102 491 in zone 4
@ROSE spot 0.112 102 491 in zone 4
}
