Choices Between Episodes Please Help

I’m trying to create choices between episodes. Can someone explain to me what I am doing wrong here?

**** Here’s the script. ****

THE AUTHOR (talk_suggest)
For your final choice, pick an outfit.

goto dressinggame

label dressinggame

    THE READER (think)
(What should I wear?)

choice (OUTFIT)
“choice A” {
@THE READER exits left
@THE READER changes into THE READER_edgy
@THE READER enters from left to screen left
gain edgy
}
“choice B” {
@THE READER exits left
@THE READER changes into THE READER_hot
@THE READER enters from left to screen left
gain hot
}
“choice C” {
@THE READER exits left
@THE READER changes into THE READER_default
@THE READER enters from left to screen left
gain default
}

    THE AUTHOR (talk_excited)
Well, what do you think?

choice
“No.” {

    THE READER (talk_neutral)
I need to try those other looks again.

redo dressinggame

} “Yes.” {

    THE READER (flirt_shy)
It's perfect.

gain outfit

}

goto end
label end

    NARRATOR
Episode 4 is next!

goto episode4
label episode 4

    NARRATOR
|bold, color: black| Chapter Four |reset|.

goto branches

label branches

@THE AUTHOR faces left
@THE AUTHOR enters from left to screen left
@THE AUTHOR stands screen left

if (edgy) {
@THE READER gains THE READER_edgy
@THE READER exits left
@THE READER changes into THE READER_edgy
@THE READER enters from left to screen left

} elif(hot) {
@THE READER gains THE READER_hot
@THE READER exits left
@THE READER changes into THE READER_hot
@THE READER enters from left to screen left
}
else (default) {
@THE READER gains THE READER_default
@THE READER exits left
@THE READER changes into THE READER_default
@THE READER enters from left to screen left
}
#insert outfit changes here

    THE READER
I don't get it.

    THE AUTHOR
I'll give you a moment.

    THE READER
Hey! Didn't I have a different outfit on in the last chapter?

    THE AUTHOR
Yes but you made the decision to change your outfit in the last chapter.

    THE READER
What does my decision from the last chapter have to do with this chapter?

    THE AUTHOR
You decided to file the decision away until this chapter.

    THE READER
Oh!

    THE AUTHOR
You can choose which chapter a decision occurs in.

    THE READER
Awesome!

    THE AUTHOR
You can make a decision in one chapter and activate it in a later chapter.

    THE READER
Interesting.

    THE AUTHOR
It is. This is how authors can make choices have affects on the story.

    THE READER
Thanks!

    THE AUTHOR
You're welcome.

End of script

I tried using the pre-made script and it didn’t do much good. I don’t know why. Thank you for helping!

The way you set up the dressing game, your readers will gain all of those gains if they try on all outfits.

If you want to use gains, you need to add a confirmation choice inside each outfit choice

Here try this

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Thank you.

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