I didnāt know what to call it but, there ya go. Iām gonna only do some certain types of art as Iām very busy and only really want to do things which I wonāt have to spend hours on. Hereās what I am doing- Splashes Character Detail Page Things Profile Pictures Art Reviews
If you would like an art review, you can pm me the piece of art if you would like it to be personal. If you want it to be public, post it here but I will post my review here. WARNING: I am brutally honest when it comes to stuff like this sooooā¦if you donāt want me to be mean to you, go find someone who lies and letās you down softly
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ā¢Donāt ask for examples, youāre just gonna have to wing it! Some of you know what my art looks like sooooā¦
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ā¢Donāt request the same things on other threads unless itās an art review
ā¢Donāt ask when itās done! Iām very busy so it may take up to a few days
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ā¢The password is- Chocolate
ā¢You have one re do, just say if you donāt like it because Iām also still improving
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What you want the review specifically about- (May be the nose, skin etc or the whole thing)
Art.1-
ā¢Loving the tattoo, it really stands out and catches my eye.
ā¢The fingers look a bit sloppy and uneven, I also struggle with this because they usually end up too big or too small but a good attempt.
ā¢I actually thought the girlās arm was her torso! I was thinking youād forgotten to add the rest of her shirt but realised it was her arm. Maybe add a bit more texture to make this clear?
ā¢The hair does look a bit strange on both as itās only really been shaded in certain areas. I recommend watching some hair tutorials to help adding strands or better highlights.
Art.2-
ā¢There are a LOT of white patches and weird pieces missing. You should go over it and fix these up to make the quality of the overall piece better.
ā¢Again, the hands looks a bit strange. They have no shape to make them pop out because they look a bit flat justā¦there.
ā¢The arms look like misshaped bananasā¦Maybe try redrawing these bits, just keep trying u TIL you get that desires look.
Art.3-
ā¢I honestly love it! I donāt really have anything to improve on it because everything is so smooth and fits in perfectly!
Art.4-
ā¢The hair is a very strange shape⦠try practising on an empty canvas with a head with all shapes and see what you prefer and what you should avoid doing.
ā¢Similar to the first piece, the hair shading is only really focused in one place. You should try a tutorial.
ā¢The Gand is a good shape this time but is in a very awkward position grabbing that phone. Maybe try re drawing this bit to make it in a less awkward position.
Here is my opinion on all of your art! Come back soon
Art.1-
ā¢The overall piece is so cute I am a sucker for babies
ā¢Eyelashes arenāt just sticks coming out of that crease thing. They look very spread apart which makes me think unrealistic. Maybe try adding more of them, not just sticks but with texture. I think that there are some tutorials out there on how to do this.
ā¢The left eyebrow just suddenly seems toā¦stop. I know what you were trying to do but it looks a little too short, so make it a bit longer so they look a bit more similar but with that positioning angle.
ā¢Some people may not agree with me on this but I think you should blend out the patch on its nose a bit more. If you were trying to create a dirt affect, you could try a darker colour or a different brush to lay it down with so it doesnāt just sit there.
Art.2-
ā¢The eyes really could do with a bit more highlighting. All I can really see is the shadows and if someone is crying I can see their eyes more shiny.
ā¢Those knuckle things kinda look like wrinkles, I recommend getting rid of them or blending them a little or making them match a little more to the skin tone so they donāt give off that.
ā¢Has he painted his nails? When I usually see them, theyāre lighter than the skin tone. Or you could go with the episode style and not have them.
ā¢I see what you tried to do with the cheek shading⦠please blend it a little more. It looks a bit like you just left it like a strip on his cheek when in reality you wanted to create an effect.
ā¢The baby heās holdingās eyelashes are sticks. Like I said with the previous piece, eyelashes arenāt just stick coming out of your eye, thereās lots of them even in babies. They also have a little more volume.
This was my honest opinion, and yes I have been a bit brutal. I hope this helped. Come back soon
Iāll try and learn how to do hands, Iām not very good at them.
Also on the one where you said there weird white patches, itās because thatās an effect and not part of the actual drawing.
If you have any idea how; could you tell me how to make the lines look like they arenāt pixelated when you zoom in and out? You can tell they are, but I donāt know how to fix that if thereās even a way to do so.
Thank you so much. Eyelashes I suck and them I will try again on that. The baby nose I see what you mean I need to blend it more and ill fix her brow. I donāt know how to make his eyes glossy itās my first time doing the crying in a art and Iāll change the nails to lighter thank you for that tip. I will use everything you said to make my art better and to make these two better. When i get my next one done can you look at it also?