Hello everyone, I used to do a lot of these, and since this a new forum and those got erased from existence, I decided to do a new Honest Reviews Topic.
Now, disclaimer: I’m not an absolute expert at English–I don’t think anyone is, or could be–but I’m quite good. I’ve been commissioned to write articles, I’ve won awards for my essays, and even had some of my work published into books. I just want to help give critical feedback to those who would like to further their writing. And writing is a very personal thing so you can obviously choose whether or not to implement my feedback.
If you’d like an honest and critical review of your story (I’ll only be reading through the first episode within this topic), please leave below your:
- Story Name
- Story Summary
- Story Link
I’ll be going on a first come, first serve basis, but if you would like priority you could give my “still-in-the-works” story a read down below, and give a little feedback. It’s not published yet, so you’ll have to click on the link on whatever item (like phone or tablet) you have the Episode App downloaded on.
Summary: Thrust into the life you were suppose to live, into the middle of a revolution, and romance- can you save your nation?