Thanks to everyone that helped me, you guys really gave me inspiration
I’m working on my new, upcoming story. As a reader, I know how important the first chapter is to attract people to your story and wanting them to read more. I’ve just finished the first chapter and I’m really curious about what people will think of it. I’m used to writing in INK and my upcoming story is in LL and it just has a different vibe to the story (I don’t know how to say it ).
If you have any free time left and willing to “proofread” the first chapter, comment on this thread or send me a PM and I’ll send you the link!
I want you to focus on;
- The storyline in general. Is it interesting? Does it make you curious to know more (by reading more chapters)?
- The characters.
- The directing.
If you have more to say, then all feedback is welcome!