[CLOSED] Lili & Akanksha's Review Thread

Hey everyone!

Have you worked hard on your brand new story and you want an opinion on it? Are you curious if your story is entertaining enough to publish it? Do you want some feedback on your published story for any possible changes or revamp?
Then, this thread is the perfect place for you! :star_struck:
Me and @Akanksha.writes are doing reviews!

:blob_hearts: Rules and other important stuff :blob_hearts:

  • Please keep in mind that this is a review thread. So, this is NOT a R4R or promoting thread. I’m all in for supporting each other, but please, only comment on this thread if you’re serious about getting feedback.
  • Comment your story information and link, so we (and maybe others!) can easily find it. Also, put your preference for reviewer! You can do that with mentioning @LiliStar or @Akanksha.writes .
  • We are going to review three chapters of your story. If you want more or less, then you can say it with a good reason. We’re not going to review more than 5 chapters, sorry :woman_shrugging:
  • We will give our honest opinions, but we’ll always say it in a friendly way. We will NEVER give hate if we don’t like the story.
  • Don’t be rude to us and others. You’re asking here for honest feedback to improve your story, so we’re automatically assuming that you’re mature enough to handle criticism.
  • Please have patience! We also have a private life.
  • We have the right to refuse your request.
  • A reaction would be appreciated! We’re doing this in our free time for YOU, so it comes off as rude to us if you don’t react.
  • All genres and styles are welcome! It also doesn’t matter if your story isn’t published yet.
  • If we ever reviewed your story in the past, then we’re not doing it again.

:blob_hearts: Waiting list :blob_hearts:

Lili’s list (NOT AVAILABLE AT THE TIME):

Akanksha’s list (5 at a time):

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Hey, I just published my story last week and would appreciate your feedback! :relaxed:

Title: The Apartment
Author: Sapphire (:
Description: Mila, Emma and Benji living together in the city often leads to some chaotic situations. But things seem to be looking up for them at least.
Episodes: 4 (and will be continued)
Genre: Comedy
Story Cover:
The_Apartment_Cover
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4951680812253184

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I would like! :heart_eyes::heart:

My first, published story

I have 8 episodes, but read as many as you want.

Thank you!

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Heyy! Is it okay if I read just one? And which story do you prefer ?

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I would love to get feedback on my story
Its all a mirage
Author: @Butterfly.ep_14
Genre: Romance
Description: An arranged marriage with your enemy Tyler Moore. Threat to the company you gave your life to help build, what will you focus on, disaster marriage or your legacy?
cover:

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Ok, maybe first one, I want to change it :relaxed:

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Thanks for doing this. I hope you can include mine to your reviewing list. You can read until chapter 3 or until 5 if it fits to your liking. I’m open for any feedback, you can be brutal if you want :laughing::two_hearts:

Title: Treasure In You
Author: L.Q. Walter
Instagram: @lqwalter.episode
Genre: Adventure/Romance
Chapters: 9 (more coming soon)
Style: Limelight
Description: After discovering an old diary she believes will lead her to the location of a long lost treasure, she teams with an unlikely ally: a guy who is downright cocky yet wickedly hot!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5342141547216896
Cover:

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Hey! Thanks for the thread. :slight_smile: I would love an honest review of my new story since it is a revamp of my old story.

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I would love to get a review, thank you! I really need feedback on my story :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

R&R: Crystal Abyss

Genre: Fantasy

Episodes: 3 (not complete)

Author: Jade135 (IG: @e.p.i._jade)

Description: Tasked with a mission that could save the entire world, you’re forced to navigate the unknown alone. But the truth always comes out, and it’s not what you expected.

Extra Information:

2 LIs | Choices Matter | Limited CC | Advanced Directing

Link:

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Hi!
I would love a review, my ig is Complicatedperson6, thank you!!

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Hi :yellow_heart: @LiliStar I want a review too

Title: I married my troublemaker (limelight)
Author name: Miss Deepika
Style: Limelight
Episode: 23 so far
Description: Fixed marriage with a person who brings trouble in your life, will this marriage turned out to be a success or big misery in your life.
{Art scenes}

Genre: comedy
Ig: @orangeweedie.episode

English is not my first language so kindly bear my small mistakes :heart:

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Hi! If you’re still open for story reviews I’d love to share mine with you!
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i’m open for an honest review!

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Hi! I was from the grammar reviews and we also did a R4R where I believe also gave my opinion. Do you still want me to review your story, or…?

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I remember now :relaxed:

It’s totally up to you, I don’t want to trouble you more :grin:

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Story- Star Lust
The tragic passing of the big superstar Cameron Alexander who has dated an ordinary girl Bella. As time has passed, more tragic happens when learning superstar’s past.

Genre- Drama/Adventure
There’s one male Li later in the story!

Full CC on the main characters!

Points-
I’m thinking of points also later in the story as right now my story is in the introduction✨

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Hey hun! thank you for this! I would like to request a review!

Other details are here.
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@orangeweedie @Solarnetic @ciaraxoxoc @xRhiannonx @Madhu

Hii! We have a new reviewer on the thread. We decided to divide the list, so your reviewer is now @Akanksha.writes :relaxed:

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yep np!

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Alright :hugs:

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