Plot: 5/5 I like fantasy and this storyline works for me 
Grammar: I didn’t sow any mistakes, BUT english is my 2nd language 5/5
Directing: It was average, I only noticed MC in episode 1 walking backwards to her aunt other than that good job! 8/10
Duration: It was fine, nothing to add here 5/5
Narration: I would advise you to rather show than tell It makes reader hard to follow what is happening to maybe add a few flashbacks? 7/10
Cover art: It’s okay, kinda doesn’t represent the story the best 4/5
Total:36/40 great job! 