Hi guys, I would love to review your story!
I’m extremely bored out of my mind right now so I thought maybe I could try out one of these.
If this flunks, you never saw me…
Okay so here is what you have to do:
Picture of your cover
Description of story
And that’s it. Simple as that.
Please remember that I can be brutally honest sometimes and I can be quite the critic.
Can’t wait to read your stories!
P.S I will only read the first chapter and if I like it, I will read more.
Oops, here’s a bit more info:
What I will return with?
I will come back and rate your story(s) from 1-5 stars depending on how good I think it is.
Then I will give you some detail on what I found good about it and what I think needs improvement.
Good luck, I’m sure that all your story(s) will be AMAZING!
Title: Haunted By Demons: Anna’s Story Genre: Fantasy Description: Anna and Viktor are battling their inner demons. They cross paths and realise they’re not alone. Will they overcome their dark sides? Or will the remain haunted by demons? Chapters: 3 (I am currently revamping it) Style: LL Instagram: @raven_author Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5947826442010624
It would mean a lot to me if you could check it out and follow me.
My god! EVERY SINGLE WRITER OUT THERE NEEDS TO READ THIS!
Please update this everysingle week just for me, girlie because I was literally taking notes.
This is going to help improve my writing so much more and I’m definitely going to leave this in my suggestions and read more of this later.
ANOTHER THING: Okay so, THIS IS THE FUNNIEST THING EVER! Honestly, this is hilarious, I just love how the author comes in and out and the author has her boyfriend who doesn’t speak it’s hilarious, at first I was a bit confused but now?
It was actually one of the funniest things that I have every read.
What needs improvement!
No story is perfect, ever story has it flaw or some mistakes here and there so-
Here is what needs improvement:
Spelling/grammar (This was actually pretty well done but there were a few noticeable mistakes)
Coding mistake (Please check over your coding script because there were a few mistake, one that I noticed is when the authors boyfriend was dancing in the club, he was walking tooooooo fast, do the doe “walks to spot in #” to fix that)
Other than that, this story is honestly, one of the best episode things I’ve ever read.
I HAVE TO RATE THIS A 4.2/5
Great job, it was truly amazing.
Don’t forget to follow me on Instagram if you can @brii_writes_epi
Hey! Please take your time getting to mine as it looks like you have a lot to go through (I am in no rush here haha)… but this is my story and i’d love it if you’d check it out (again, when you have the time; no pressure at all)
Story Title: The Florist
Story Cover & Description: