How many choices are in the same choice menu? (If that makes sense?)
Because it’s hard to know if some of your choices are supposed to be in one part or separate.
For example, I’ve noticed that your first choice “Are you serious” is on it’s own, as you’ve used the word choice again for your next one which is “Turn Back” whereas if they were supposed to be choices together where the reader picks, you would write the word choice again, it would be like this… (and you would follow this theme)
Choice “Are you serious”{
scene here
} “Turn Back” {
scene here
}
So on so on.
(If they’re separate your missing a choice block end on line 6517 to close the bracket before your second choice)