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Can anyone spot a mistake I made?
Here is the code:

INT. EURO HOTEL ROOM - DAY

@transition fade in black 5

@cut to zone 3

@NAME spot 0.737 -123 383 in zone 3 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is idle_lay_facedown_loop_rear

@NAME spot 0.737 -123 383 in zone 3 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is idle_lay_facedown_loop_rear

@HAZEL walks to screen right in zone 3

@HAZEL is talk_neutral_loop_rear

readerMessage Let’s see if you have enough points with Hazel to unlock a bonus scene.

@pause for 2.5

readerMessage Calculating relationship points

@pause for 4.5

if (HAZEL = 6) {

@HAZEL faces left

@pause for 2

readerMessage You didn’t have enough points. :{

    HAZEL (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)

Come on NAME, you have more royal business to do.

    NAME (talk_sit_shrug_neutral)

What exactly?

    HAZEL (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)

Well you have two options

    HAZEL (talk_sarcastic)

You can either help the maids decide what cleaning product to use...

Or you could help the chef's figure out what pans they should use to cook dinner, lunch, breakfast, and refreshments.

} elif (HAZEL > 6) {

@HAZEL faces left

    HAZEL (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)

Come on NAME, get your|animation:flash, color:red| a** |reset| up.

    HAZEL (talk_airquotes)

You have some|animation:flash, color:red| super |reset| important royal business to attend to.

@NAME is idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop AND HAZEL is laugh_giggle

    NAME (laugh_giggle)

What exactly?

    HAZEL (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)

Well you have two options

    HAZEL (talk_sarcastic)

You can either help the maids decide what cleaning product to use...

Or you could help the chef's figure out what pans they should use to cook dinner, lunch, breakfast, and refreshments.

    HAZEL (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)

Which if you ask me are decisions that should be able to make on their own.

But they obviously need the input of the royal princess, to make sure they please her.

    HAZEL (talk_airquotes)

And everything is to her pleasing.

    NAME

...

choice

β€œIt’s not that bad.” {

@NAME spot 0.737 -123 383 in zone 3 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is talk_sit_shrug_neutral

    NAME (talk_sit_shrug_neutral)

It's not that bad.

    NAME (talk_sit_coy)

I mean I like that they listen to me.

I am the princess

    HAZEL (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop) -1

NAME how could you say that, I mean-

    HAZEL (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)

Never mind.

}

"I wish they wouldn't do that" {

@NAME spot 0.737 -123 383 in zone 3 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is talk_sit_shrug_neutral

    NAME (talk_sit_deny_neutral)

I wish they wouldn't do that.

    NAME (talk_sit_doubtful)

I mean they all studied supper hard to get to work here-

I trust their judgement.

    HAZEL (talk_agree_happy) +1

I agree-

I'm glad we can see eye to eye.

}

} else {

@HAZEL faces left

@pause for 2

readerMessage You didn’t have enough points. :{

    HAZEL (talk_awkward_loop)

Princess, you have a few more errands to run.

    NAME (talk_awkward_loop)

Of course.

    HAZEL (talk_awkward_loop)

Well you have two options.

    HAZEL (talk_armsraised_neutral)

You can either help the maids decide what cleaning product to use...

Or you could help the chef's figure out what pans they should use to cook dinner, lunch, breakfast, and refreshments.

}

    HAZEL

So, who are you going to choose?

    NAME

I'm going to choose...

choice

β€œThe maids” {

    NAME

I'm going to choose the maids.

}

"The chef's" {

}

What does the script editor say? Next to the script?

It says:

Expected CHARACTER or SCENE change. Found β€œβ€I wish they wouldn’t do that”{β€œ instead. Did you forget to CAPITALIZE the name, or close the ( ) around the animation.

But when I remove the code the error is still there, but about something different.

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what does it say differently?

It says the same thing about the β€œmaids”, or β€œchefs”, choice code.

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Sorry, IDK

It’s okay.

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:slightly_smiling_face:

@Dara.Amarie (Sorry for tagging you again.)

Could you take a Picture from the script? I can work better with that

Here you go:


@sahra.episode

Delete the space right over the line in which the error occured

You are a life saver!

@Sydney_H can you close this. :slight_smile:

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