Coding Help Needed (NEW STORY)

Can somebody help me fix this:

&overlay 4773320685453312_POOL WATER shifts to -5 -45 in zone 1
&overlay 4773320685453312_POOL WATER scales to 1.000 1.000
&overlay 4773320685453312_POOL WATER moves to layer 10
@VALERIE changes into VALERIE_swimming
@GREYSON changes into GREYSON_swimming
@TYLER changes into TYLER_swimming
@MARGRET changes into MARGRET_swimming
@JANICE changes into JANICE_swimming
&cut to zone 2
&zoom on 421 410 to 290% in 0
@EMMA spot 0.326 114 483 in zone 2 AND EMMA faces right AND EMMA is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop
NARRATOR (RYAN)
Way!
NARRATOR (KYLE)
We go swimming!
NARRATOR (JANICE)
Yup!
EMMA (idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop)

&EMMA faces right
@EMMA walks to spot 0.245 109 497 in zone 2 in 3 AND EMMA is walk_neutral_loop_rear
&EMMA faces right
&EMMA spot 0.281 102 502 in zone 2 AND EMMA is idle_sit_sad_loop
EMMA
(They look like they’re having fun.
EMMA
(I’m glad!)
@EMMA is idle_sit_anklescrossed_neutral_loop
EMMA
(This is nice.)
@EMMA is idle_sit_leanback_neutral_loop
EMMA
(Ahh…)
EMMA
(This feels so good.)
@pause for 2
@EMMA is idle_sit_neutral_loop
@pause for 1
@EMMA is standup_neutral
@EMMA walks to spot 0.281 108 488 in zone 2 in 3 AND EMMA is jump_happy_loop
&zoom on 433 279 to 408% in 0
@EMMA spot 0.281 117 463 in zone 2 AND EMMA faces left AND EMMA is idle_treadwater_worried_loop
@VALERIE spot 0.281 29 457 in zone 2 at layer 0 AND VALERIE faces right AND VALERIE is idle_drowning_panic_loop
&EMMA faces left
@EMMA spot 0.281 143 449 in zone 2 AND EMMA is swim_loop_rear
&pan to zone 1 in 2
@EMMA faces right AND EMMA walks to spot 0.281 68 430 in zone 2 AND EMMA is swim_loop_rear
&EMMA faces right
@EMMA spot 0.281 55 374 in zone 2 AND EMMA faces left AND EMMA is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear
&zoom on 416 356 to 385% in 0
&cut to zone 2
&VALERIE spot 0.281 175 491 in zone 2 AND VALERIE faces right AND VALERIE is idle_lay_awake_neutral_loop
@EMMA spot 0.290 135 433 in zone 2 AND EMMA faces left AND EMMA is idle_sit_legsup_neutral_loop
EMMA
(Oh god!)
EMMA (talk_sit_legsup_neutral_loop)
Can you hear me?
VALERIE
Y-Yes.
@pause for 1
@VALERIE is collapse_lay_groggy_eyesclosed
&VALERIE spot 0.281 121 496 in zone 2 AND VALERIE is lay_cpr_receive_loop
&EMMA faces right
@EMMA spot 0.290 122 498 in zone 2 AND EMMA is kneel_cpr_give_loop_rear
EMMA
(Come on! Come on!)
@pause for 4
@VALERIE faces right AND VALERIE is idle_lay_exhausted_loop AND EMMA is idle_sit_legsup_neutral_loop
@EMMA spot 0.245 125 467 in zone 2 AND EMMA faces left AND EMMA is idle_sit_legsup_neutral_loop
@VALERIE spot 0.281 89 449 in zone 2 AND VALERIE is idle_sit_legsup_neutral_loop

What’s going wrong that you need fixed?

What exactly is wrong in this ?
Like what help u want?

It looks horrid

If you can be more specific, I bet we can fix it!

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