CODING HELP PLEASE-Sloth


#1

I’m trying to make my first Episode story on here and I keep messing up the coding, even though I’m following directions on youtube and guides, but it keeps giving me errors…


#2

I could try and help if u want


#3

THANK YOUUUUU !
I tried to screen shot the error but it won’t let me :confused:
Okay, it says I can’t have one character immediately folllowing another.


#4

Can u type it out or find another way to show me?


#5

INT. BLACK - NIGHT
NARRATOR
Chapter 2- Uhhhh
Sorry, still trying to figure out choices with clothes.
Other choices I understand…but not clothes…sigh…

INT. SIMPLE LIVING ROOM - DAY

@ROSEMARY enters from right to screen center AND ROSEMARY faces right

@pause for a beat

    ROSEMARY (think)
(What do I want to wear?)

@pause for a beat

@ROSEMARY (dustoff_loop)

@ROSEMARY changes into The Monster -RM- lazy

ROSEMARY (primp)
Now that feels better…

ROSEMARY (talk_apathetic)
I’m gotta do a little bit of homework before going to bed.

ROSEMARY (talk_excited)
Yay, for me that it’s a writing class…

ROSEMARY(talk_sheepish)
And they want us to write something…

ROSEMARY (talk_startled)
PERSONAL

INT. BLACK - NIGHT
NARRATOR
To be continued…

that’s the chapter so far…


#6

Try making this 2 separate commands


#7

made the change but it still is giving me the same error T_T


#8

Where does it say the error is
Like which line


#9

ROSEMARY (talk_startled)
PERSONAL

it has the X at this top line there


#10

If u have “PERSONAL” line like this :

  ROSEMARY (talk_startled)
  PERSONAL

Then it thinks “personal” is another character name
Line it up like this :

 ROSEMARY (talk_startled)

PERSONAL


#11

Okay that worked but now it’s saying that @ROSEMARY (dustoff_loop) is not a valid directing command.


#12

Try
@ROSEMARY is dustoff_loop


#13

YES!!! Thank you!!! Currently no more errors!!! but now I have to take a break from this to do my job :sweat_smile: