College Days - Review for review

Title: Ocean’s 5
Author: Lara P.
Genre: Action
Chapters: 3 out (more coming soon)
Style: Ink
Description: Five highly skilled and most dangerous people on Earth are brought together for the biggest heist ever seen. What can go wrong?
Instagram: @larapstories
Link: https://episode.app.link/mRmxbzLPYR


This is my first story ever.
I will read my story.
Give my story a chance.
Thank you.

Thank you so much for your review! It was very thorough and helpful, and it gave me a lot to think about!! I really appreciate it. :slight_smile:
I hate making excuses, but I do know that this story isn’t my best work. I wrote it two years ago and quit it because I didn’t like it. But when the College Days contest appeared, I thought I would just submit it because it fits the theme.

I’m very busy over the weekend with competitions and such, but I’ll be able to give your story a read on Monday. I’ll let you know what I think as soon as I can.

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