Comedy Story Review Requests

Hi Everyone,
I’m now accepting comedy story review requests.
*A note- I like dry, sarcastic, Witty humor so those types of stories would be best for me to review.

Please look at my previous threads and Instagram (@penspaperanddreams) to see how I Review stories. If you’re interested in getting a review, please send me a DM on instagram.

I look forward to reading your stories!!!

I really need to improve my story I would greatly appreciate a review. thanks :blush:
Name: Art of Desire
Author: Joqueena
Genre: Comedy
Summary: A love for art but a stronger desire for each other. Will they be able to quench their thirst or will mishaps break them
Style: ink
Published: yes
Instagram: Joqueena_stories (feel free to follow me)
Episodes: 3
Questions: Story too long?
Is the plot interesting enough?
Are the directives good?
Are the characters explained properly
Is the genre more comical or romance?
Is the story understandable?
Art of Desire

Moved to Share Feedback section as that’s where review threads live! :v:t2:

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Hello! I’ll add it to the review list

Okay thanks… :laughing:

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@Ryan please close this thread

I’m only accepting contest entry requests. Thanks!

Closing per OP request :v:t2: