Hello everyone, my name is Connolly, and I have decided to open up a story review station!
All I need to review your story is:
Link To Story
I will read the first 3 episodes ONLY.
I will grade your stories based on the following :
Story 25 points
This means how interesting your story is, how much did you plan it out? Does it flow smoothly? Are there any plot holes?
Characters 20 points
Do the characters have vibrant personalities that describe them? Are there missing characters?
Directing 15 points
This one is more obvious. Are zooms clean? Are there obvious errors? Is a character randomly upside down for some random reason?
Choices 25 points
Are choices coded nicely? Do your choices have an impact on the story?
Language 10 points
Are grammar and spelling ok? If a different language is used in a couple of lines, are there direct translations?
Cover (Bonus 5 points)
I know that many people will think that judging a cover is a poor choice, but I see it important. If you have a bad cover, you are less likely to get more reads. A good cover will encourage readers to click on your stories. This is similar to a youtube thumbnail.
Genres I prefer over others : (this means I will be more eager to finish your review)
Your score will be out of 100, which mean I can give you a letter grade.
I grade brutally honest, don’t expect me to sugar coat it because I will not.
Wait time is about 1-2 days.