Connolly's Story Reviews! <CLOSED>


#1

Hello everyone, my name is Connolly, and I have decided to open up a story review station!
All I need to review your story is:

Story Name
Author Name
Link To Story

I will read the first 3 episodes ONLY.
I will grade your stories based on the following :
Story 25 points
This means how interesting your story is, how much did you plan it out? Does it flow smoothly? Are there any plot holes?
Characters 20 points
Do the characters have vibrant personalities that describe them? Are there missing characters?
Directing 15 points
This one is more obvious. Are zooms clean? Are there obvious errors? Is a character randomly upside down for some random reason?
Choices 25 points
Are choices coded nicely? Do your choices have an impact on the story?
Language 10 points
Are grammar and spelling ok? If a different language is used in a couple of lines, are there direct translations?
Cover (Bonus 5 points)
I know that many people will think that judging a cover is a poor choice, but I see it important. If you have a bad cover, you are less likely to get more reads. A good cover will encourage readers to click on your stories. This is similar to a youtube thumbnail.

Genres I prefer over others : (this means I will be more eager to finish your review)
Comedy
Fantasy

Your score will be out of 100, which mean I can give you a letter grade.
I grade brutally honest, don’t expect me to sugar coat it because I will not.

Wait time is about 1-2 days.


#2

Hi, @connollyep!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for, so, if possible, I would like a review.

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af


#3

Hey there! Could you give me a review? :wink:

Story Title : Just a little Mix-Up
Author: gin_ny
Genre : Comedy, Romance, Roommate
Episodes: 11 (complete)
Description: For Shane, college was supposed to be a new start… but things get out of hand with one mistake!
Style : Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5926612431798272
Instagram: NA


#4

Hey! My story is a romance, sorry. But there are some funny bits… I think. I would love a review! Xx

Title: Reformed
Author: Cordelia M
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4696324662099968

Thanks! :yellow_heart:


#5

I’d love some feedback on my first story.

Title: Wedding Rebound
Author: KerriRox
Genre: Romance
Summary: Kori gets dumped days before her best friend’s wedding. The bride suggests she find a rebound at the wedding. Will Kori find the man of her dreams at her best friend’s wedding?

Note: There’s some adult language

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5920846013792256
Instagram: Kerrirox.episode


#6

A review would be amazing! :blush::two_hearts:
Title: The Next Stage
Author: Lisa.p
Genre: Comedy
Description: Stephen & Molly, Stephen a lovable fool and Molly an inspiring artist. Follow them on to the next chapter of their lives.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5833794190180352 1
Instagram: @lisa.p.episode


#7

Perfect! I’ll get this done as soon as possible.


#8

Thanks for requesting!


#9

Awesome! Thanks!


#10

I’m super excited to get this done! Thanks for requesting!


#11

I’ll get this done as soon as possible! Thanks for requesting!


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