Constitutive Criticism Needed!

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THAT’S IT!!!

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I mean-

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oh no

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You asked for constructive criticism tho

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@Sydney_H close this, PLEASE!

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Yes

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yeah like why

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We gave you suggestions to improve your story, so I meannn :woman_shrugging:t2: Isn’t that the point of you creating this thread

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But why take it in such a bad way? Think of that as a little push to better your story, and not wasting time on here trying to argue w someone.

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The story is about her being emotionless. So what? Cancel it?!

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I’ve never said anything about cancelling it have I? I said to improve your story using the suggestions we provided, not delete your whole story smh.

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It’s about her being emotionless and if being emotionless makes the story “weird” how can I improve it?

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Okay! I think as far as your stories go, you should make your own opinions! It makes the story more unique when you use your own ideas and inspiration :)) i get my inspiration from watching netflix shows and seeing how well the scenes are written!

have a nice day/night !!

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Then that’s what you need to start working on, how to better the script.

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Jeez! You’re basically telling me to change everything! Whatever.

I think I’d rather take this advice, than completely change/cancel my story!

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U haven’t given a good description of your story and we have no idea what’s going on, so PPL here have given criticism on what they know- that is she is emotionless??

I think what they mean weird is we don’t know the plot. Is the plot being emotionless? Like-

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No- It’s your own story, and you get to decide how to write it, we each have different opinions, but we gave you ways to improve your story that’s all, the rest is up to you n what you want to do with that information.

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The plot is her finding her emotions again.

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You did not mention that! It probably made PPL confused. I think your story is a great idea since ik what the plot is.

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Thank you!

All I really want is some opinions on what is good and bad and the feedback to be given in a way where it doesn’t sound rude and like they want to roast me.