Hi! I entered a story for the Fanastical contest and I wanted to know if anyone would like to review my story?
Please be honest and fair, I won’t get upset after all it is your opinion and You can say what you want.
BUT THERE ARE RULES:
- DO NOT BE NASTY AND RUDE
& I WON’T EITHER!
- BE FAIR WITH YOUR CRITICISM
OVERALL JUST HAVE FUN READING MY STORY!
TITLE- Fantastical: The Mermaid
EPISODES 4 (ongoing)
DESCRIPTION: Kyle is a chef always seeking new ways to improve his cooking. One day on his search his boat accidently crashes in the forbidden waters of Gaya where he meets the guardian of the sea: A Mermaid!