Constructive feedback?

[epy.emmily]

hi guys! so i really want to improve on my art so i’d really appreciate some feedback on my most recent pieces!

^ the second one is for an OC on instagram!

[kateharper]

Your art is soo amazing!!!
My only suggestion is to maybe make the pupils black because that would make it a lil more realistic
but your art is soooooo beautiful

[CiCi1]

The shading is kinda harsh on the face I like the glow maybe blend it a bit more so it stretches forward and doesn’t seem so lined out but these are amazing!!

[TamiRose]

These are awesome. I agree with the other two posters and also be cautious of the eyebrows, one looks thicker than the other in the first and third. But, keep going and you’ll have it all down in no time

[epy.emmily]

thank you!! i’ll keep that in mind

[epy.emmily]

Thank you!!

[epy.emmily]

Thank you so much!

[aristotilee]

Maybe you should try out coloured inking. I’ve tried that before and it looks kinda candy-like.

[rubywrites]

It looks beautiful.

[epy.emmily]

whats that?

[epy.emmily]

thank you so much

[aristotilee]

It’s where you have coloured lines instead of just black lines.

[epy.emmily]

ohh
i tried that once
it didn’t turn out well

[aristotilee]

for example, I do coloured inking for my art
like this:

[aristotilee]

oh, that sucks

[epy.emmily]

thats beautiful
but unfortunately its not my style

[epy.emmily]

new piece! what do you think?

[aristotilee]

It’s cute, the shading is really realistic.

[epy.emmily]

thank you!!