Cookeyara Art Training Camp

[fcukforcookies]

So @Epiexpert is the winner of the Second Week Colored Outline. Congratulations.

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Now to Third Week Outlines

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@Epiexpert

@fcukforcookies

Overall the outline is good. Head traced well, hands are very good. The issue is with the right arm. The upper part is way too short, even considering the angle. Try to check urself in the mirror mimicking poses u r drawing. I find it helpful to me. Also, check his shorts, Trouser-legs bottom parts look different, as one is more rounded.

@Cheyara_Skadi

Good line work overall, neat tidy and meets the criteria for the task. Slight mishap on the handwork it seems, there’s a little bit of a strange shape given to it. Also, there are a few places where the lines don’t meet, this happens when using certain settings with your drawing tools, however, try to make sure that the ends do meet to keep it polished, also the lines on the shorts are really mismatched.

2nd outline

@fcukforcookies

Here I see more problems with proportions. To be honest overall outline seems to be done in a hurry. Arms differ in thickness, hands are too small and left arm overall is off, especially upper part. Seems like a freehand, which is good, but pay more attention to proportions. I also don’t get the thing with shorts. Are these knee pads? No consistency in this one tbh, arms are different, legs are different, leg-trousers are different.

@Cheyara_Skadi

Again a neat piece that you have created, again work on making the lines meet, as well as also checking proportion sizes and symmetry. His shoulders are a bit off which would happen in a certain stance, however the rest of his body doesn’t reflect that and looks level.
The legs are really rather slim in comparison to the arms, as well as the knees being small. Their structure needs improving to make the sizes more balanced and realistic.
The hands are well drawn, don’t forget to add some more definition to the joints on the hands though when drawing them.

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@Maria.StoryWritter

@Cheyara_Skadi

Good strong piece, although some of your lines are also not touching, small thing but is something easily fixed. The detailing on the dumbbells is done really well. Some lines are a bit shaky, like on the arms and shirt detailing.
The facial symmetry is really good and drawn well, my only comments there are that the ears seem a bit too high, also the head is a bit small, therefore is overshadowed by the rest of the body, also the face is lacking a bit of shape, it seems a bit too round, good work on the hands though.

@fcukforcookies

I think you did much better with the face features this time. Hands turned out very good.
Lines are a bit shaky overall. Right arm is definitely shorter (and short) than the left one, pay attention. The letter on his short gives an illusion that his torso is portrayed forward, that kinda screws the whole body angle. I think the torso is drawn good, but this letter just creates this illusion. And the head is a bit small.

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@Infinitee

@fcukforcookies

Well, legs are excellent in proportions. Well done. Hands themselves are good as well. But the way you portrayed torso+shoulders+arms+t-shirt print makes it look like the torso itself is shown with the straight angle, while neck is really shown as turned sideways. hair is done really messy and fast tbh, very basic hair outline. Profile line is quite good, although eyes are definitely too far away from the nose bridge.

@Cheyara_Skadi

Lines are tidy, a few overlaps that need to be fixed, the head looks a little small to me as well, and the eyebrow needs to be more fitting to a side on image, as it is it’s too big and doesn’t arch into his face like it would in this postition.
The hair to me is minimal effort here, Just doing a basic, simple hairline is fine, but it needs to actually contain a structure to work with, this is just an empty space, its then hard to determine style and most that you will get really from this is a pannel of colour.
The same effort with the clothes here really, it looks like they are all made with lines being drawn over the general body shape, not much to work with on the realism front, don’t forget clothes aren’t glued to the body.
Great work on the legs although the thigh seems a little slimmer on the rear leg.

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We will post new task shortly.