@CrazyCaliope is an awesome proofreader. Don’t worry, She won’t steal anything 
Hum. I never figured.
Well, I’m glad if it helped in any way
Just remember that I’m a tough critic, most of the readers aren’t. It may seem like I’m overly picky on details, but it’s just how my brain works) So I’m glad there are no hard feelings. It may not seem like this from what I wrote, but your story is more than decent. It’s just when I do reviews, I tend to look for imperfections, that’s why it might seem like negative evaluation. 
Although I was serious about gang plot. It is too complicated to put along with the mystery plotline, and show them enough in just 5 episodes