Could somebody review my story summary?

I have a story idea, but I’m worried that it’ll come off as too cliche. If anybody is willing to give me advice, could you please PM me for more details?


Sure. Do you have a link? (It’s easier) or story name?

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Sorry, it’s not directed yet, I just have the summary, and I was wondering if I could get advice from a few different people as to things I could change. If you’d be okay with that, can you please PM me?