Could someone give his opinion for my story, please?

#1

Hi everyone.

I am a new author and I’m French.
I would like to know if anyone could give me an opinion on my story because I’m afraid I did not write my story well…
Maybe the title and the introduction don’t fit with my story … (35 reads since the month of June)

This is the link :

Thank you for your kindness.

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#2

Ça parle de quoi ?

#3

C’est une fille qui à eu des problèmes pendant son adolescence, et qui est agressive avec les autres.

#4

Aaah.

What the genre ? Drama ?

#5

C’est dans la catégorie Dramatique.

#6