Could someone give me feedback on my first story?


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Hey guys,
could someone give me feedback on my first story “Teacher or Queen”? I would love to hear as many opinions as possible to make my story good.
I have only published the first episode to see if it is worthy to continue or what should I change or improve in coming episodes. That is also a reason for no description or cover. I am just starting and I will add everything later. Now I just want to know some first impressions on the story, directing, language etc. itself. This is my very first experience with Episode writing so I would also appreciate your tips for making this better if you have any that would help my story.

Please feel free to express your opinion. I am already looking forward to reading it.

Thank you!


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Tittle: Search for love.
Author Name: Sigma.fr
Intagram: Sigma.fr.writes
Story Description :Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation! Can you find the love you are looking for trying to escape?
Genre: Drama
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5548786201264128


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