Could someone please review my story?

I’m looking for honest feedback on the first 5 chapters in my story. Just to make sure everything is looking alright, there aren’t any glitches that I’m not seeing, spelling mistakes… etc. I’d like to know if this story is good enough that I should keep publishing? I’m going to keep writing because it’s something I truely enjoy doing.

Title: Stardust to Infinity.
Style: Ink.
Genre: Romance/Comedy/Drama.
Plot: Freedom is like music to Scarlett’s ears, but will meeting one Irishmen change everything? Will the stars align, or will they burn out?
Cover:
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Link:

Thank you so much in advance! :heart:

I just realized I posted this in the wrong forum! SORRY!!!

I haven’t read it yet, looks great tho. I will go and read it now :ok_hand:t3:

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Thank you very much!! :heart:
I’m very excited to hear your feedback :blush: Hope you enjoy!

Lol np :hugs:

I’ll check it out too! Looks amazing btw

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Thank you very much!! :sunny:

ima read it

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Samr

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You’re most welcome! I actually read the episodes! It’s very well done! I love the MC too!

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Thank you all so much!!
And thanks for your kind words :blush:

You’re very welcome!:grin:

I’m going to go read, I’ll message you with feedback. :blush: