Could someone review my stoery

here’s my story :> i really need honest review since this is my first story T.T
Name story: Amazing Inside
Genre: Fantasty
Chapters: will be continue.
Description: Can Emma control her emotion when she realize they come out and talk to her!! Can she balance love, family and friendship before a mystery power come and destroy everything.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5843577419464704

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Yeah, i can! Do you want me to review here, pm or ig

here :))

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Okay ! :slight_smile:

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Thanks you so much ^^ oh and what’s your ig ?

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oh, can you post your review on my ig ? is Alessglux_episode

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