Could someone review my story please?

Hi, my name’s Marina and I was hoping someone could review the first three chapters of my new story! I know asking for a review can be kind of vague, so here’s what I’m looking for:

What do you think of the characters? (especially Lucas and Sol)

  • Are they lovable/ hateable?
  • How is the character developement?
  • Do you want to know more about them?
  • What do you think of the character’s relationships?

What do you think of the plot?

  • Is it too cliche/ did I not make it unique enough?
  • Is it too predictable?

How is the directing?

Would you continue to read?

  • Please don’t feel like you need to answer every question! I just thought they would be helpful. Feel free to ignore them too! :joy:

  • If you decide to review my story say something below and then we can pm!
    Thank you!!!


Author: Marina

Story Title: Until We Get There

Genre: Romance

Description: It’s time for Sol to catch a break and find out who she really is. Taking a vacation seems like the perfect idea, but what happens when a summer fling turns into something more?


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