Could someone turn this into a story beginning or monologue?
ps: add dialogues
The Mafia is at a really dark ally and they’re trying to catch the traitor that betrayed them by snitching. The boss (Taro) wanted to see if his daughter (Celia) had what it takes to be a member of the mafia so Taro passes a gun to Celia and tells her to shoot, Celia hesitated.
I just want some ideas.
here u go ! i’m not sure if this is exactly what u wanted and i also got carried away a bit 
the cold crippling object pointed directly at (traitor). the feel of the weapon in my hands. the heavy weight of the guilt that would result of executing this could not compare to the small weight of the weapon. the curve of the trigger, the stretch leading to the barrel, the (describe look) on (traitor) face. . .
i feel (taro) shoot a menacing glare in my direction, “my own daughter hesitating ?’ he scoffs. he is barely audible over the pounding of my heart. for a minute i think he’s about to do the job himself.
i attempt to respond to his sneers but my voice fails me. i feel adrenaline shooting through my body. i feel frozen, frightened. i feel like a failure. . .
Well this is amazing
OMGGGG THANKS SO MUCH, this is FREAKINNG ADVANCES LMFAO THANKS!
awh ha ha thank you !!
its fine 
im glad u like it <3
also i wanna read this story once its out 
Do you write stories? Cause like you really good 
awhh:) Plus do you have any advice for writing? I mean cause you seem really skilled
im actually in the process of writing my very first episode story ! only on episode 1 tho . . . im very new to the whole directing thing but im getting the hang of it
if you ever need help writing or like proof reading u can always ask me. ill gladly help!
That’s good to know! Well remind me when it’s our or if you need a proofreader 
definitely and same goes 
omg really? Thanks!
no problem !