Hello, I would like to ask for feedback on my story
I am open to any kind of criticism if it’s constructive and helpful. I always appreciate feedback, whether it’s focused on the plot, on directing or grammar or the cover. Feedback is always welcomed
Why should you read my story:
- I believe I am creating something different from “normal” Episode stories.
- I am focusing more on older characters and their life - regretting some past decisions, learning how to live with decision they have already made, dealing with work life and a kid. But mostly dealing with unbearable pain and suffering.
- Decisions plays a huge part in my story - who does the main character decide to become knowing that her decision will change the fate of so many people ?
- I focus a lot on topic of love and the faith and desire to fight for the loved ones.
- There is a deeper meaning behind every line and it is up to every reader if they decide to open to it and see it or not.
- And many many more things. Just read it and you will find out!
Title: Teacher or Queen?
Description: After years of searching she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose - who will she become?