[Creator's Contest] Adventurous


#675

Share the story in our chat and I would gladly give feedback. :heart:


#676

Sounds interesting. I would love to beta read it.


#677

Beta? Sorry still new at it


#678

That means I’ll test read it and give you feedback before you release it to the public.


#679

Omg that would be great :green_heart:


#680

When would you like me to read it?


#681

Not sure I’m about halfway done with episode 1


#682

That’s fine. PM me when your done. :heart:


#683

If anyone wants a beta reader/pre reader/opinion I’m more than happy to :slight_smile: (I’m not entering myself)

Please note: I like to think I’m constructive but I can be a little… harsh maybe? Blunt? lol


#684

Well, if you don’t enter you never know.

What makes you think you are less better then others? Enjoy writing it and even if you don’t win, you make the people who read your story happy with it.


#685

agreed.


#686

Hi all! I’m super excited and nervous. This will be the first contest I ever enter, and the first story I ever publish. I just love this theme! I can’t wait to see all the upcoming entries. What do you think is absolutely necessary in an adventure story? Like what would truely make the story worth reading?


#687

Needs.

Good grammar and spelling.
Not basic directing, more advanced.
Potential good plot.
Choices that are impactful.
10-15 min episodes.

Those are the basics. :heart:


#688

I think what most look for in an adventure story is if you can keep the readers guessing/wanting more & have lots of thrilling scenes while on the adventure. :blush:


#689

I’d like to take you up on that offer :slight_smile:


#690

I had an idea and wanted to hear your guys’ thoughts on it, I haven’t seen it done before. What about having a sort of, omniscient narrator for my story? Like, you know how in a TV show it shows like different things happening to different characters at that same time and like how they all intertwine. I don’t know, I think it would work. What do you guys think?


#691

Its a really good idea!


#692

I would like that offer. :heart:


#693

agreed, I’m going to enter for fun


#694

I would love that so much