can some please give me feedback on my story ? tell me if you like it or not !
its called “That Summer” and here’s the link : Episode Writer Portal
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Honestly, pretty good first episode, I read it and loved it- had a good cliffhanger too. The editing is nice too, like the intro and directing. Some of the speechbubbles are kinda facing the wrong way and some grammar is a bit off, but other than that it was good. I would suggest when the MC is narrating you should make it kinda known. e.g. when editing do NARR (character name) so you sorta know who is narrating : ) overlays used are great too 
gl on your story 
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thank you! i’ll fix those things.
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also one more thing! do you think i should rewrite the whole thing ? because that’s what i was planning to do.
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I think maybe the first episode only. Maybe have a bit more dialogue betwen Merle (sorry if i spelt it wrong) and the MC. The second and third episode are fine in my opinion I liked the third ep 
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okay , i’ll keep that in mind. thank you!
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hey can you do chap 1-2 of mine later?
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Sure I’m free now I can do it : )dm me
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ok u have insta ?
Unfortunately not yet. I wanted to make one when I released my story. Can you do it in forums dms?
yep
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I have a thread that’s currently open to requests - all kinds, story reviews, proofreading, opinion based comments, any questions, brainstorming.
Kind of like a free ‘shop’ with a waiting list - feel free to pop over there and follow the instructions listed on the thread.
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