Critique/Review for Stories

Thanks ! I’ll try to correct the mistakes :slight_smile:

Hi! I just published my first story and would love to get some honest feedback that will help me improve in my writing and directing.

Title: H & V: Lie to Me
Author: Alexandra Mar
Genre: Mystery/Drama with romantic subplots
Description: After only serving 3 years of a 25 to life sentence, Aiden Suarez is mysteriously released. But wait, what’s that? Oh right, “Aiden Suarez” no longer exists.

Title: H&V: Our Story
Author: Ki_Writes
Episode Link:
Description: When Ava’s younger sister goes missing, she must work with a group of superheros to save her.
Instagram: ki_writesepisode

Sorry forgot the link
Episode Link:

Hi, @flapstar!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. This is my first story ever but I have put a lot of effort in it and would highly appreciate any feedback! I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story:

Sorry y’all, but I’m gonna stop taking reviews until I catch up with the ones posted above this.

Title - Best friends
Author - Hiba A.
Episode link -
Description - Scarlet has recently started high school in a new town. She is teased and bullied for her looks and outfit till she finds a bestfriend who changes her life completely.
Instagram - @episode.hiba
Do read my story and give your reviews on my Instagram :grin:

Hey there! I would love to get a review for my new story!

Title: H & V: Shadows of My Past
Author: Zayen Ng
Description: Running from a secret organization that raised you as an assassin, how long could you hide before your past catches up to you? How far will things have to go before you kill again?
Instagram: @episode.zayen


I would love to get some feedback on my first story!

Author Name: Mariana Fidalgo
Story Title: My Semester Abroad
Genre: Drama
Description: Mia Travis is starting the adventure of her life when she gets accepted as an exchange student in Germany. Love, drama, sorrow and friendship. How is your heart going to take it?
Instagram: mariana_fidalgo
Episodes: 4 (more coming)


Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile: