Dani's Saturday Sips - Free Reviews


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DANI’S SATURDAY SIPS (UNDER CONSTRUCTION)
PLEASE BE PATIENT WITH ME WHILE I ATTEMPT TO GET MY THREAD BACK TOGETHER
Hi Hi Writers!

Welcome to my review thread! I’m looking to read more stories as I snuggle, and sip my coffee on my down time, and help out writers as well. I’ll do my best to give you my best tips, tricks and advice on the stories that I read. And so without further ado, here is how the magic will go down!

MY REVIEW PROCESS

  1. I will only read up to your second episode for your review. I’m not keen on paying for passes, but I do like to read a couple times throughout the day.
  2. If you don’t fill out the form correctly, I’m going to skip yours. I’ll let you know to fix it and I’ll come back to it.
  3. I am a full time employee of 2 jobs, a wife and a mommy, so I will do my best to do the reviews within a week.
  4. I will do reviews in batches of 5. There will be a waiting list, so please be patient.
  5. As my thread suggests, reviews will come out on Saturday. It is my most productive day and free day of the week.

WHAT YOU GET

I will give you my, first impressions, my thoughts on your plot & characters, your pacing & directing and grammar. I will also give you an overall thought of the story as I see it so far. I do my best to give constructive criticism and help you. I also understand that you may not agree with everything that I have said. Please, know that I am not saying anything to hurt your feelings. That is not what this is about. I just want to help you and read some stories in the process.

I will be posting all reviews in the thread. If you had an in depth question, please hit me up on my Instagram and DM me! I’m glad to talk to you one on one for a minute as I have time.

Please fill out and use the form below. (You can copy and paste)

Title of Story: by: (Author Name)

Genre:
Description:
Would you like a Full Review? Or General Overview?:
Something fun about why you wrote this story:
Link to your story:

THE COFFEE HAUS (Currently being reviewed)
1. Castino
2. clarkies
3. lawful_evil
4. lisa.p
5. Himawari
6. xAbbyBx
7. Lexi_L

THE TEA ROOM (Waiting List - Will be updated)

  1. giamorina
  2. MysteryMaker
  3. Mary.G9
  4. Manna
  5. ana_banana
  6. stormyartist.18
  7. cribb
  8. Res
  9. Ltxo
  10. Yeah09
  11. Sweet_Stories
  12. bethanyk14
  13. lawful_evil
  14. AMar
  15. K_Aritist2001
  16. Alex_Af
  17. Zayen

DON’T FORGET TO SUBSCRIBE TO THIS THREAD SO YOU CAN RECEIVE UPDATES!
CURRENTLY ACCEPTING REVIEW REQUESTS


#2

Moved to the Share Feedback section as that’s where review threads live atm. Carry on! :v:t2:


#3

Title of Story: Break You Right by: Fabs

Genre: Drama
Description: Whilst hiding your affair, you discover things about your relationship and the people around you that change your life forever
Full Review
Something fun about why you wrote this story: I wanted to do something unique from a male perspective.
Link to your story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5350888023130112


#4

Title of Story: The Most Powerful Scream by: CatEyedGoddess

Genre: Drama/Comedy

Description:Tally is a mute trying to find her voice again. She suddenly gains the attention of the whole school when she starts speaking again and befriends Alexander Crawford.

Would you like a Full Review? Or General Overview?: Full Review

Something fun about why you wrote this story: I feel like most stories published are all about bad boys, pregnancies, the mafia, and other cliches. I wanted to write a story about a character that needed to be developed. A character that needed to grow. I made Tally mute because I used to go to speech therapy and we were all very anxious, one girl was pretty much mute… rarely said anything. I was kind of inspired by her, for the most part.

Link to your story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4730912379633664


#5

Title of Story: Indifference at First Sight by: Ashsmashum

Genre: Drama
Description: Felix is the new guy at school when he meets Ashley, the bad girl with a lot of secrets. But is he as innocent as he seems?
3 possible endings!
Would you like a Full Review? Or General Overview?: full review
Something fun about why you wrote this story: I was inspired by a lot of the stories that I’ve read on episode and wanted to start writing, this is the third story that I’ve written and it’s by far my favorite.
Link to your story:
Share your story and improve your rank!
Your shared story will update each time you update the published story.


#6

Title of Story: Demon God by: E.Z.

Genre: Fantasy

Description: He starved himself for three hundred years in order to abide by a woman’s promise. Everyone in Devildom is waiting for him to die.

Would you like a Full Review? Or General Overview?: Full review please

Something fun about why you wrote this story: This idea has been in my mind for quite many years, I’m eager to write it down.

Link to your story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4678673313693696


#7

Title of Story: by: (Author Name) Zartrensa: Hearts of War by Clarkie

Genre: Drama
Description: Zartrensa is a country in Carosa that has been at war for 100 years. Will the marriage of Princess Cassandra save her country? What secrets will she learn?
CC/Choices Matter/LGBT
Would you like a Full Review? Or General Overview?: Full Review please!
Something fun about why you wrote this story: This was my first ever story. I was reading a lot of Princess stories at the I began writing this and wanted to make one of my own.
Link to your story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5601686881697792


#8

**Hey, can you please read my story? **

Title: Romantic Cruise
Author: Lawful Evil
Style: Ink
Genre: Romance, Drama
Episodes: 4 [Completed] 2 endings
Description: You break up with your cheating boyfriend and go on a cruise. What will happen if you meet a mysterious dangerous man? Customize Characters
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4697971707478016

Please leave me some feedback :slight_smile:


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I Can Do This ?! by: Lisa.p

Genre: Romance
Description: An absent father, ill mother and a secret has called violets life to crumble but then she meets Jackson. Will her life take a turn for the better?
Would you like a Full Review? Or General Overview? Full review, please :slight_smile:
Something fun about why you wrote this story: I have made a couple of short films before so I thought episode would be a great place to put my ideas
Link to your story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4780615129497600


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Lol, calling the waitlist the Tea Room and the actual reviewing-list the Coffee Haus made me smile :stuck_out_tongue:

Anyway, here’s my story info! Thanks in advance for doing this :slight_smile: :

Spotlight: Jellyfished by: Himawari
Genre: mystery/romance
Description: Did you know? Jellyfish do not have hearts. Yet they live. What if a human, a woman would lose this vital organ…and live?
Would you like a Full Review? Or General Overview?: Full Latte Macchiato :wink:
Something fun about why you wrote this story: it was for the spotlight on love contest…I wanted to write something different than a romance/drama-focused story and came up with this curious idea after playing with my thoughts for a while…I really love writing ‘weird’ stories like these the best! When this one’s finished, I still have a lot more up my sleeve…but for now, I have my hands full on this story and my other story :relaxed:
Link to your story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5598230056927232


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Hey guys! Starting this week I’m going to start reviews again! I hadn’t reopened the thread, but instead of waiting on them to update the bb code to get my thread like it was before, I’m just going to push ahead with what I have. I’m starting to get really bored waiting, lol! SO, if you are not familiar with my thread from the other forums, I was only doing 5 a week, but now I’m going to be doing 7! So yaaaaay!

So I’m opening 28 spots for March! Once I fill all 28, I’m going to close my thread until April! Remember to subscribe to get updates!


#12

Title of Story: The FireDraco’s Destiny by: AbbyB

Genre: Fantasy
Description: Rhea’s life was destroyed when they found her. New friends, love and a tough mission has given her purpose. Now? She’s back and ready to give them everything she’s got…

Would you like a Full Review? Or General Overview?: Full review please.

Something fun about why you wrote this story: I was always inspired by other episode writers and would love to share my ideas and imagination to others.

Link to your story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6247706304053248

Thanks for you time xxx


#13

Classified by Lexi L

Genre: Action
Description: After witnessing a murder Sienna Scott’s life was turned upside down. However with the help of her two best friends and investigation team, justice will be served.
Would you like a Full Review? Or General Overview?: Full review please
Something fun about why you wrote this story: I came up with the very beginning while walking home from school based off of my surroundings.
Link to your story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6012346638663680


#14

Name: Prominent Gift
Author: Gia Morina
Genre: Fantasy/Werewolf/Romance/Drama
Description: Kidnapped at 16, Piper finally escapes after three years. She finds herself in the home of the soon to be Alpha King. What happens when her kidnappers come looking for her? How long can the Alpha King keep her protected?
Number of Episodes: 4
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5263005260054528

Thank you :heart:


#15

BUMPING!!!

3 more spots to fill! I’m reviewing 7 at a time and I almost have enough for two weeks! Don’t be shy! If I have reviewed yours and you’d like a re-read after you’ve made changes post it again! I’d be happy to give it a second look for you!


#16

Title of Story: Mr Bond’s Murder
Author: Mystery Maker
Genre: thriller/comedy/mystery
Description: A snowy night, A few clues and a murder investigation, where no one is reliable to be trusted…
Something fun about why you wrote this story: I wanted to write a story that is different from the stories that are in trend now a days in episode,I wrote this one at the age of thirteen in a notebook but when I got to know about episode,I thought it was the right place to convert it into an animated version.
Link to your story:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6705429627011072

I would love to hear your opinion about my story. :slight_smile:


#17

Title of Story: Saving Anna by: MaryG

Genre: Romance/Drama

Description: Anna is a young, sweet girl whose life has been strucked by tragedy more than once. At this point of her life, someone new enters her life, someone exits and someone reappears. Will the handsome stranger be able to save her from herself and her demons?

Would you like a Full Review? Or General Overview?: I would love it if you could give me a general review on the story.

Something fun about why you wrote this story: I wanted to write a story that touched a few personal subjects as a way to deal with them, so after some thinking I came up with Anna’s story and decided to give it a try.

Link to your story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5043136061112320

I’d love to get some feedback on it, thank you.


#18

Title of Story: Mei by: Manna

Genre: Action, Mystery, Drama

Description: It was almost as if he was waiting for me to come to his rescue, a trap set for me Instead he fell into mine…

Would you like a Full Review? Or General Overview?: I would like a Full Review

Something fun about why you wrote this story: The lead is inspired by the kind of person my fiance is in real life. The lead is a fighter and there is this beautiful relationship between the lead and her best friend (It’s been my favourite relation I have ever written. )

Link to your story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6274704344219648


#19

Title:Sing with me
Genre:Drama
Description:Tragedy . Can a wounded lover be able to move on and find peace or will everything fade away like the foam of the salted sea?
Full review
Somehting fun why you wrote the story: I wrote the story to try writing stories, for fun, because I like writing. Mostly to give important messages.
Cover:night

Link to my story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5232918662348800


#20

Title of Story: Family Values by: Danny

Genre: Drama
Description: “Secrets. Betrayal. Tragedy. The Baldwin family was tight knit- but all it takes is one stray thread to unravel it all.” A family as close as ever- with secrets no one could imagine. When things begin to slowly unravel before them, will your bond with them still be as strong? Or will you break under all the pressure?
Would you like a Full Review? Or General Overview?: Full review please!

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Something fun about why you wrote this story: I wrote this story from the perspective of the oldest daughter, Samantha. I noticed there aren’t currently a lot of stories on Episode featuring a black family, or a family of color, and I wanted to change that. I also wanted to create a story that had a lot of unexpected twists- as I love to read those kinds of stories myself!

Link to your story: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/write/story/Family_Values_27
(I hope the link is correct!)