Dara Amarie's Official Help Thread! [closed]


#1842

Ok, here it is:

INT. 3 SPLASH
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volume music 40 4000
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EXT. SOUND SPLASH - NIGHT
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music off
@transition iris out
EXT. PHILADELPHIA HOUSE - NIGHT
@transition fade in gray
NARRATOR
Friday night. The night of Savannah and Derek’s first date
@transition fade out
INT. YOUR BED - NIGHT
@pan to zone 2
@SAVANNAH enters from left to screen center
&SAVANNAH starts cheer_loop
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SAVANNAH (talk_happy_smile)
I’m so excited for my date with Derek!
label 1_1_dressinggame

    SAVANNAH (talk_think)
Hmm, what should I wear?

choice (OUTFIT)
“Stylish and Chic” {

@SAVANNAH exits left
@SAVANNAH changes into Stylish and Chic
@SAVANNAH enters from left to screen center

if (TRIED_STYLISHANDCHIC) {

    SAVANNAH (talk_handsonhips)
This looks amazing!

} else {

    SAVANNAH (talk_think)
Hmm. This looks nice. I can definitely wear it for Derek...

gain TRIED_STYLISHANDCHIC
}

} “Laid-Back”{

@SAVANNAH exits left
@SAVANNAH changes into Laid-Back
@SAVANNAH enters from left to screen center

if (TRIED_LAIDBACK) {

    SAVANNAH (talk_happy_smile)
Wow! Comfy.

} else {

    SAVANNAH (talk_arms_crossed)
I look like I haven't tried hard, but in a decent way!

gain TRIED_LAIDBACK
}

}“Pretty”{

@SAVANNAH exits left
@SAVANNAH changes into Pretty
@SAVANNAH enters from left to screen center

if (TRIED_PRETTY){

    SAVANNAH (admire)
Wow! I look beautiful!

} else {

    SAVANNAH (talk_handsonhips)
This outfit is the one.

gain TRIED_PRETTY
}
}

    NARRATOR
Are you happy with this outfit?

    SAVANNAH (talk_think)
Hmm, am I?

choice
“Nope!” {

    SAVANNAH (talk_doubtful)
No way.

redo 1_1_dressinggame

} “Yes, of course I am!” {

    SAVANNAH (talk_forward)
It's magnificent! Thanks!

}

    SAVANNAH (strike_a_pose)
I look so good in this outfit!
    SAVANNAH (talk_think)
How should I do my hair?

label INK_hair

    NARRATOR
Choose your hairstyle.

choice
“Short Hair”{
goto INK_hairShort1
}“Mid-length Hair”{
goto INK_hairMedium1
}“Long Hair”{
goto INK_hairLong1
}“Curled Hair”{
goto INK_hairCurled1
}“Tied-Up Hair”{
goto INK_hairUp1
}“Change Color”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_hairShort1

    NARRATOR
Choose your hairstyle.

choice
“Buzzed Hair” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Buzzed Hair
goto INK_hairShort1
}“Classy Pixie” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Classy Pixie
goto INK_hairShort1
}“Messy Pixie” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Messy Pixie
goto INK_hairShort1
}“Pixie” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Pixie
goto INK_hairShort1
}“Unstyled Faux Hawk” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Unstyled Faux Hawk
goto INK_hairShort1
}“Next Page”{
goto INK_hairShort12
}“Change Length”{
goto INK_hair
}“Change Color”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_hairShort12

    NARRATOR
Choose your hairstyle.

choice
“Slicked Back” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Long Slicked Back Hair
goto INK_hairShort12
}“Twist Hair” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Twist Hair
goto INK_hairShort12
}“Long Faux Hawk” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Long Faux Hawk
goto INK_hairShort12
}“Cornrow Faux Hawk” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Cornrow Faux Hawk
goto INK_hairShort12
}“Shaved Sides” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Shaved Sides
goto INK_hairShort12
}“Previous Page”{
goto INK_hairShort1
}“Change Length”{
goto INK_hair
}“Change Color”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_hairMedium1

    NARRATOR
Choose your hairstyle.

choice
“Bed head” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Shaggy Long Hair
goto INK_hairMedium1
}“Classic Bob” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Classic Bob
goto INK_hairMedium1
}“Dreadlocks” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Long Dreadlocks
goto INK_hairMedium1
}“Straight Bob” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Straight Bob
goto INK_hairMedium1
}“Suburban Bubble” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Suburban Bubble
goto INK_hairMedium1
}“Natural Curls” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Natural Curls
goto INK_hairMedium1
}“Change Styles”{
goto INK_hair
}“Change Color”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_hairLong1

    NARRATOR
Choose your hairstyle.

choice
“Layered Hair” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Layered Hair
goto INK_hairLong1
}“Long Feathered” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Long Feathered
goto INK_hairLong1
}“Jules Hair” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Jules Hair
goto INK_hairLong1
}“Long Straight Bangs” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Long Straight Hair
goto INK_hairLong1
}“Straight” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Straight
goto INK_hairLong1
}“Next Page”{
goto INK_hairLong12
}“Change Styles”{
goto INK_hair
}“Change Color”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_hairLong12

    NARRATOR
Choose your hairstyle.

choice
“Scene Hair” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Scene Hair
goto INK_hairLong12
}“Styled Corn Rows” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Styled Corn Rows
goto INK_hairLong12
}“Side Head Scarf” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Side Head Scarf
goto INK_hairLong12
}“Long Braids” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Long Braids
goto INK_hairLong12
}“Box Braids”{
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Black and Red Box Braid Updo
goto INK_hairLong12
}“Previous Page”{
goto INK_hairLong1
}“Change Styles”{
goto INK_hair
}“Change Color”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_hairCurled1

    NARRATOR
Choose your hairstyle.

choice
“Beach Wave” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
goto INK_hairCurled1
}“Diva Curls” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Diva Curls
goto INK_hairCurled1
}“Long Curly Hair” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Long Curly Hair
goto INK_hairCurled1
}“Rebel Half Shaved” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Rebel Half Shaved Hairstyle
goto INK_hairCurled1
}“Short Curly Hair” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Short Curly Hair
goto INK_hairCurled1
}“Change Styles”{
goto INK_hair
}“Change Color”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_hairUp1

    NARRATOR
Choose your hairstyle.

choice
“Casual Braided Pigtails” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Casual Braided Pigtails
goto INK_hairUp1
}“High Ponytail” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into High Ponytail
goto INK_hairUp1
}“Fishtail Braid” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Fishtail Braid
goto INK_hairUp1
}“Messy Back Bun” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Messy Back Bun
goto INK_hairUp1
}“Double Bun” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Double Bun Updo
goto INK_hairUp1
}“Braided Crown” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Braid Crown Updo
goto INK_hairUp1
}“Next Page”{
goto INK_hairUp12
}“Change Styles”{
goto INK_hair
}“Change Color”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_hairUp12

    NARRATOR
Choose your hairstyle.

choice
“Punk Ponytail” {
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Urban Punk Ponytail
goto INK_hairUp12
}“Dancer Bun”{
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Dancer Bun
goto INK_hairUp12
}“Pulled Back”{
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Monday Morning Updo
goto INK_hairUp12
}“Cornrow Bun”{
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Cornrow Bun
goto INK_hairUp12
}“Ponytail Locks”{
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Ponytail Locks
goto INK_hairUp12
}“Short Tied Up”{
@SAVANNAH changes hair into Short Tiedup Hair
goto INK_hairUp12
}“Previous Page”{
goto INK_hairUp1
}“Change Styles”{
goto INK_hair
}“Change Color”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_haircolor1

    NARRATOR
Choose your hair color.

choice
“Dark”{
goto INK_hairDark1
}“Light” {
goto INK_hairLight1
}“Dye”{
goto INK_hairDye1
} “Back to Styles” {
goto INK_hair
}

label INK_hairDark1

    NARRATOR
Choose your hair color.

choice
“Black” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Black
goto INK_hairDark1
}“Chestnut Brown”{
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Chestnut
goto INK_hairDark1
}“Cayenne”{
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Cayenne
goto INK_hairDark1
}“Auburn” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Auburn
goto INK_hairDark1
}“Different Colors”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Back To Styles”{
goto INK_hair
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_hairLight1

    NARRATOR
Choose your hair color.

choice
“Blond” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Blond
goto INK_hairLight1
}“Fawn” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Fawn
goto INK_hairLight1
}“Platinum Blond” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Platinum Blond
goto INK_hairLight1
}“Strawberry Blond” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Strawberry Blond
goto INK_hairLight1
}“Coral” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Coral
goto INK_hairLight1
}“Different Colors”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Back To Styles”{
goto INK_hair
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_hairDye1

    NARRATOR
Choose your hair color.

choice
“Bright Blue” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Blasting Blue
goto INK_hairDye1
}“Green” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Grievance Green
goto INK_hairDye1
}“Hot Pink” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Pop Pink
goto INK_hairDye1
}“Purple” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Punky Purple
goto INK_hairDye1
}“White” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into White
goto INK_hairDye1
}“Next Page”{
goto INK_hairDye12
}“Different Colors”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Back To Styles”{
goto INK_hair
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_hairDye12

    NARRATOR
Choose your hair color.

choice
“Charcoal” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Charcoal
goto INK_hairDye12
}“Light Blue” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Blue Light
goto INK_hairDye12
}“Mint” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Mint
goto INK_hairDye12
}“Passion Fruit” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Passion Fruit
goto INK_hairDye12
}“Grey” {
@SAVANNAH changes hairColor into Grey
goto INK_hairDye12
}“Previous Page”{
goto INK_hairDye1
}“Different Colors”{
goto INK_haircolor1
}“Back To Styles”{
goto INK_hair
}“Done”{
goto INK_hair_end
}

label INK_hair_end

    NARRATOR
Is this the look you're going for?

choice
“Yes, love it!” {
goto story_continue
} “No, let me try something else” {
goto INK_hair
}

    SAVANNAH (talk_think)
Now for my make-up...

label INK_Lip

    NARRATOR
Choose your lip color.

choice
“Natural Colors” {
goto INK_Natural
} “Bright Colors” {
goto INK_Bright
} “Dark Colors” {
goto INK_Dark
}“Done”{
goto INK_Finish
}

label INK_Natural

    NARRATOR
Choose your lip color.

choice
“Blush” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Blush
goto INK_Natural
} “Dune” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Dune
goto INK_Natural
} “Ivory” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Ivory
goto INK_Natural
} “Mocha” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Mocha
goto INK_Natural
} “Taupe” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Taupe
goto INK_Natural
} “Terracotta” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Terracotta
goto INK_Natural
} “Toffee” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Toffee
goto INK_Natural
} “Next Page” {
goto INK_Natural2
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto INK_Lip
} “Done” {
goto INK_Finish
}

label INK_Natural2

    NARRATOR
Choose your lip color.

choice
“Umber” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Umber
goto INK_Natural2
} “Rosewood” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Rosewood
goto INK_Natural2
} “Dusty Rose” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Dusty Rose
goto INK_Natural2
} “Dark” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Dark
goto INK_Natural2
} “Sable” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Sable
goto INK_Natural2
} “Chestnut” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Chestnut
goto INK_Natural2
} “Previous Page” {
goto INK_Natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto INK_Lip
} “Done” {
goto INK_Finish
}

label INK_Bright

    NARRATOR
Choose your lip color.

choice
“Bubblegum Pink” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Bubblegum Pink
goto INK_Bright
} “Champagne” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Champagne
goto INK_Bright
} “Olive” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Olive
goto INK_Bright
} “Cherry Red” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
goto INK_Bright
} “Orange Crush” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Orange Crush
goto INK_Bright
} “Raspberry” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Raspberry
goto INK_Bright
} “Next Page” {
goto INK_Bright2
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto INK_Lip
} “Done” {
goto INK_Finish
}

label INK_Bright2

    NARRATOR
Choose your lip color.

choice
“Rose” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Rose
goto INK_Bright2
} “Ruby Red” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Ruby Red
goto INK_Bright2
} “Seafoam” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Seafoam
goto INK_Bright2
} “Sky Blue” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Sky Blue
goto INK_Bright2
} “White” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into White
goto INK_Bright2
} “Lavender” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Lavender
goto INK_Bright2
} “Previous Page” {
goto INK_Bright
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto INK_Lip
} “Done” {
goto INK_Finish
}

label INK_Dark

    NARRATOR
Choose your lip color.

choice
“Azure” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Azure
goto INK_Dark
} “Raven” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Raven
goto INK_Dark
} “Bordeaux” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Bordeaux
goto INK_Dark
} “Plum” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Plum
goto INK_Dark
} “Emerald” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Emerald
goto INK_Dark
} “Scarlet” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Scarlet
goto INK_Dark
} “Wine” {
@SAVANNAH changes mouthColor into Wine
goto INK_Dark
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto INK_Lip
} “Done” {
goto INK_Finish
}

label INK_Finish

    NARRATOR
Is this the look you're going for?

choice
“Yes, I look perfect!”{
goto story_continue
} “No, let me try a different color.”{
goto INK_Lip
}

label story_continue
@SAVANNAH is idle_happy
@pan to zone 1
@MELISSA enters from left to screen center
MELISSA (talk_call_out)
Hey, Vanna, he’s…
&MELISSA starts startled_surprised
MELISSA (talk_excited)
Oh my gosh, you look amazing!!!
@SAVANNAH walks to screen right in zone 1 AND SAVANNAH starts idle_awkward
MELISSA (talk_handsonhips)
Wow.
SAVANNAH (talk_happy_agree)
Thanks, Mel. You said he came?
MELISSA (talk_exclaim_yes)
Yup. He’s talking to Mom and Dad right now.
@transition fade out

This is the first part of the script.


#1843

I just tested your script and it plays through the template.

So when you test it, do you play through the dressing game and then for the “are you happy with this outfit” choice you click on “Yes”, then right after you click on yes it skips over the hair and make up part?


#1844

It lets me play through the hair part, but not the make up part. That’s the wonky thing about it.


#1845

Whoever made the template put a goto story_continue in the “Yes I love it” choice at the end of the hairstyle section, which takes you to the end of the whole template, which completely skips the lipstick section.

So remove the part that I bolded from that template.

label INK_hair_end

NARRATOR
Is this the look you’re going for?

choice
“Yes, love it!” {
goto story_continue
} “No, let me try something else” {
goto INK_hair
}

Also, where did you get the template from?


#1846

Hey, how do you put music during the Episode? like background music?


#1847

Continuing the discussion from How to use sound:

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#1848

I forgot where the template was from. I requested it, too.

Also, what label do I use for continuing onto the lipstick instead of goto story_continue?


#1849

You don’t need a label, it will continue to the lipstick part automatically since it’s right after the hair part.


#1850

It worked! Thank you so much, Dara, you’ve saved me!


#1851

I see what happened, you asked me for a lip template a while ago (which I provided), and then it seems like you combined the lip template I gave you with a hair template, which is why it skipped the lip part because those 2 templates weren’t made with each other (if that makes sense). If you wanted an INK hair and lip template combined, I have one that’s already made in my link in my profile.


#1852

Ohhh. That explains why it messed up.


#1853

Hey, I’m wondering if you could help me with this. My character’s aren’t doing the animation.


#1854

Are you trying to have YOUNGER OLIVIA do the idle_loop_rear animation, or have you created a character named MIRROR and want that character to do the animation?


#1855

I created the MIRROR, that I would like to do the animation.


#1856

Have you placed that character in the scene?


#1857

Yes. Olivia’s on the left AND MIRROR’s on the right.


#1858

Wait so which character is the one that’s not doing the animation you want them to do?


#1859

MIRROR. Olivia’s doing the right animation.


#1860

Have you tried testing this scene in the app?


#1861

No. Do you think it’s a web previewer glitch?