Dara Amarie's Official Help Thread! [closed]

#3963

What am I doing wrong?

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#3964

Remove the word “stand”. It’s just CHARACTER spot % x y

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#3965

INT. GRANDMAS HOUSE BEDROOM - DAY
@LILLE enters from left to screen center faces faces right
LILLE (read_phone_neutral_loop)
LALALALALALALALA.
@TEYLER enters from left to screen left
TEYLER (talk_angry)
MOM AND DAD ARE ANGRY WITH ME, AGAIN.
LILLE (talk_startled_neutral)
WOW, WHAT?
TEYLER (talk_complain_angry)
You. Have. To. Help Me.
NARRATOR
What do I do? (THIS AFFECTS YOUR RELATIONSHIP WITH YOUR SISTER!!!)
choice
“Help, after all she is your sister” {

TEYLER (sing_dance_clap_happy_loop) +2
THANKS SO MUCH LILLE!
readerMessage TEYLER +2 SHE WILL REMEMBER THIS ;).
TEYLER (talk_excited_happy)
I MAS JOKING LILLE, JUST TESTING YOU TRUST, THAT’S ALL.
@TEYLER exits left
LILLE (eyeroll_subtle)
Really
choice
}“Don’t help, It’s her problem” {

TEYLER -2 (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
F U.
readerMessage TEYLER -2 SHE WILL REMEMBER THIS;)
@TEYLER exits left
LILLE (talk_awkward_loop)
Now I am in her bad side, I better watch out
}
its wrong for some reason?

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#3966

You have 2 “faces” here. Remove the other one, and you need to add “and CHARACTER”

You only need to add the word “choice” just once and only right before the first option. So remove the second “choice” word

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#3967

hi I was wondering if it was possible to have more than one overlay in a scene at one time
If so could I please have the script template

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#3968

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#3969

thank you

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#3970

I did a scan of this thread. Is there a template in there so I can have some extras stand in the background of a scene? Forgive me, if it has already been mentioned.

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#3971

You can go here and ask for a script template.

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#3972

If I don’t do that, will it also be an error for my readers, or is it only the writer who can see it? This may sound like a dumb question, but what is the “web previewer”? And how do I use it on my computer? Now that I’ve used your customization templates, when you make the readers choose a lip color for a day at school, for example, how do you change back to the “default” lip color that the readers chose, when they’re going to sleep? I hope you get what I mean lol.

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#3973

The web previewer is what you use to look at your story. Example:

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#3974

Wow, brain fart lol. Thank you.

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#3975

How do I use filters? I wanna make it to where there is a flashback but it’s in black and white. How do I do this?

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#3976

No problem.

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#3978

For your first question: It’s only for you so you can test out your flags.

For your last question:

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IN NEED OF (professional) ASSISTANCE!
#3979

Read this post

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#3980
 JADE (think)
(Should I let her see my dresses and give her a little show??)

choice
“Yes”{

    JADE (talk_happy_smile)
So this is what I bought.

label choosing_outfit

choice
“Red Hottie”{

@JADE exits right

@JADE changes into JADE_sexy_1

}
“Black Beauty”{

@JADE exits right

@JADE changes into JADE_sexy_2

}
“White Sassy”{

@JADE exits right

@JADE changes into JADE_sexy_3

}

@JADE enters from right to screen center

@JADE faces right

@JADE is dance_drop_it

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@SARAH is admire

    SARAH (talk_flirt)
Wow such a hottie!!!

    

    JADE (primp)
(Should I wear this for tonight??)

choice
“Hell Yes!!”{

    JADE (talk_primp_condescend)
I always look amazing!!

}
“Try Something Else On”{
goto choosing_outfit

}

}
“Nah I want it to be a secret”{

    SARAH (talk_handsonhips)
Ok miss secret

@JADE is laugh_chuckle

}

So I want my character to show 3 dresses to her friend and when I give the player the option to choose the dress or try another one but once you click the try another dress option it brings you to the

JADE (think)
(Should I let her see my dresses and give her a little show??)

choice
“Yes”{
}
“Nah I want to keep it a secret”{
}

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#3981

so where do i put the label at??

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#3982

JADE (think)
(Should I let her see my dresses and give her a little show??)

choice
“Yes”{
goto choosing_outfit
} “Nah I want it to be a secret” {
goto after_outfit
}

OUTFIT GAME GOES HERE.

label after_outfit

REST OF STORY GOES HERE

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#3983
    JADE (primp)
(Should I wear this for tonight??)

choice
“Hell Yes!!”{ So right here I want it to take me to

    JADE (talk_primp_condescend)
I always look amazing!!

“Try Something Else On”{
goto choosing_outfit

}

label after_outfit

    JADE (talk_arms_crossed)
Nah I want to keep it a secret 

    SARAH (talk_handsonhips)
Ok miss secret

@JADE is laugh_chuckle

    NARRATOR (MOM)           **Here**
Jade are you home dear!

But it doesn’t and takes me to the keep it a secret choice so what do i do??

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