Dara Amarie's Official Help Thread! [closed]

I know some writers choose a background and say

NARRATOR
This is your friend (you can choose any label beside friend. Enemy, devil, love interest, etc.)

Then you have to name the character any name and put

@CHARACTER enters from left to screen center

Or something like that
And put

NARRATOR
What would you like to call your best friend?

Then put the script template on how you ask a name.

Something like that. This is probably very confusing but I know that’s how some writers do it. Also, the goal is not to put the characters name before the player types the name that they wish.

I know you can zoom in slowly but is it possible to zoom out slowly?
Btw you’ve been a ginourmous help for the story I’m currently writing, you’re amazing!

Sorry for being such a bug, but how do you put an overlay in a specific spot and a zone other than the default zone?
Something I tried to do for example:

EXT. DAD’S HOUSE - DAY with SALE (I uploaded my own overlay)

@SALE scales to numbers

@SALE shifts to numbers

But it always either is not on screen or it stays in it’s default position

You can change the question to something like “What should be this character’s name?” or whatever you want the question/statement to say.

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You’re very welcome! :blush:

Which zoom out did you mean? Zoom out to show the whole background, or zoom out of a spot that you had zoomed into?

To zoom out to show the whole background, the zoom percentage needs to be less than 100%
@zoom on x y to 50% in 3

To zoom out of a spot you had already zoomed in on, just change the percentage back to 100%. So if you zoomed on 180 224 to 390%, do this:
@zoom on 180 224 to 100% in 4
Keep the same x and y numbers.

Check out this guide to using and animation overlays

You need to type in the word “overlay” before the overlay name for those commands:
@overlay SALE scales to …
@overlay SALE shifts to …
Or you can just add the scale and shift coordinates to the background name

Thank you soooooooooo much!

Thank you soo much you don’t even know how helpful you’ve been!

Thanks so much, i had no idea how to do it!!!:heart_eyes:

You can’t skip a whole line between an ending bracket and the next choice option.

It needs to look like either of these:

} "Hate it" {

or

}
"Hate it" {

Hi! Does anyone have a lipstick, hair & eyebrow template?

INK or limelight?

Limelight

Eyebrow color or shape, or both?

Both

Hi you help me unexpectedly back in March and I don’t want to bug you but I was editing my previous stories and I made a mistake and deleted the dressing game choices and now I’m trying to put then back but I’m not sure if I’m doing them right because I keep getting an error here’s my script





Later on in the story



And here’s the error

The if/elif/else isn’t meant for choices. To make it easier for you, I have a template for a simple dressing game in the link in my profile.

Ok and thank you

I followed the guide but if I choose outfit 7, try on another outfit before buying it and try and get it to remember that I had on outfit 7 it puts me in outfit 5

label HairLipBrows

        NARRATOR
    What do you want to change?

choice
"Hairstyle" {
@FEMALEAVATAR starts idle
goto HLB_Hair
}"Lipstick"{
@FEMALEAVATAR starts idle
goto HLB_Lip
}"Eyebrows" {
@FEMALEAVATAR starts idle
goto HLB_Brows
}<GREEN> "This looks good!" {
goto story_continue
}

label HLB_Hair

        NARRATOR
    Which style would you like?

choice
"Short Hair"{
goto HLB_HairShort
}"Mid-length Hair"{
goto HLB_HairMedium
}"Long Hair"{
goto HLB_HairLong
}"Styled Hair"{
goto HLB_HairUp
}<GREEN>"Done"{
goto HLB_HairFinish
}

label HLB_HairShort

        NARRATOR
    What hairstyle would you like?
choice
"Afro" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Afro
goto HLB_HairShort
}"Blunt Bangs" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Blunt Bangs Short
goto HLB_HairShort
}"Classic Bob" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Classic Bob
goto HLB_HairShort
}"Curly Bob" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Curly Bob
goto HLB_HairShort
}"Fade" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Short Curly Fade
goto HLB_HairShort
}"Pixie" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Short Pixie
goto HLB_HairShort
}"Short Wavy" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Short Wavy Hair Solid
goto HLB_HairShort
}<GREEN>"Change Styles"{
goto HLB_Hair
}<GREEN>"Done"{
goto HLB_HairFinish
}

label HLB_HairMedium

        NARRATOR
    What hairstyle would you like?
choice
"Braided" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Medium Braided
goto HLB_HairMedium
}"Medium Dreadlocks" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Medium Dreadlocks
goto HLB_HairMedium
}"Wavy Ombre" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Short Wavy Ombre
goto HLB_HairMedium
}"Straight" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Straight Medium
goto HLB_HairMedium
}"Medium Curly" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Medium Curly Solid
goto HLB_HairMedium
}"Hair Flip" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Hair Flip
goto HLB_HairMedium
}<GREEN>"Change Styles"{
goto HLB_Hair
}<GREEN>"Done"{
goto HLB_HairFinish
}

label HLB_HairLong
        NARRATOR
    What hairstyle would you like?

choice
"Beach Wave" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
goto HLB_HairLong
}"Long Braided" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Long Braided
goto HLB_HairLong
}"Long Dreadlocks" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Long Dreadlocks
goto HLB_HairLong
}"Feathered" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Long Feathered
goto HLB_HairLong
}"Long Blunt Bangs" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Long Straight Loose Bangs Blunt Solid
goto HLB_HairLong
}"Sideswept Bangs" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Long Straight Loose Bangs Sideswept Solid
goto HLB_HairLong
}"Straight" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Long Straight Loose Solid
goto HLB_HairLong
}<GREEN>"Change Styles"{
goto HLB_Hair
}<GREEN>"Done"{
goto HLB_HairFinish
}

label HLB_HairUp
        NARRATOR
    What hairstyle would you like?

choice
"Braided Bun" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Braided Bun
goto HLB_HairUp
}"Faux Hawk" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Long Faux Hawk Solid
goto HLB_HairUp
}"Short Ponytail" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Short High Ponytail
goto HLB_HairUp
}"Long Ponytail" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Long High Ponytail
goto HLB_HairUp
}"Morning Updo" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Morning Updo
goto HLB_HairUp
}"Punk Pixie" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes hair into Punk Pixie
goto HLB_HairUp
}<GREEN>"Change Styles"{
goto HLB_Hair
}<GREEN>"Done"{
goto HLB_HairFinish
}

label HLB_HairFinish
        NARRATOR
    Is this the look you're going for?
choice
<GREEN>"Yes, I look perfect!"{
goto HairLipBrows
} "No, let me try something else."{
goto HLB_Hair
}


label HLB_Lip

        NARRATOR
    Which lipstick color would you like?
choice
"Natural" {
goto HLB_LipNatural
} "Gloss" {
goto HLB_LipGloss
} "Matte" {
goto HLB_LipMatte
} <GREEN> "Done" {
goto HLB_LipFinish
}

label HLB_LipNatural

        NARRATOR
    What lipstick color would you like?

choice
"Fair Rose" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Fair Rose Matte
goto HLB_LipNatural
} "Fair Neutral" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Fair Neutral Matte
goto HLB_LipNatural
} "Fair Gold" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Fair Gold Matte
goto HLB_LipNatural
} "Beige Light Gold" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Beige Light Gold Matte
goto HLB_LipNatural
} "Beige Gold" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Beige Gold Matte
goto HLB_LipNatural
} "Beige Rose" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Beige Rose
goto HLB_LipNatural
} <GREEN> "Next Page" {
goto HLB_LipNatural2
} <GREEN> "Try Other Colors" {
goto HLB_Lip
} <GREEN> "Done" {
goto HLB_LipFinish
}

label HLB_LipNatural2

        NARRATOR
    What lipstick color would you like?

choice
"Beige Deep Neutral" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Beige Deep Neutral
goto HLB_LipNatural2
} "Tan Deep Neutral" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Tan Deep Neutral
goto HLB_LipNatural2
} "Brown Neutral" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Brown Neutral
goto HLB_LipNatural2
} "Brown Gold" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Brown Gold
goto HLB_LipNatural2
} "Brown Deep Gold" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Brown Deep Gold
goto HLB_LipNatural2
} "Brown Deep Rose" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Brown Deep Rose
goto HLB_LipNatural2
} <GREEN> "Previous Page" {
goto HLB_LipNatural
} <GREEN> "Try Other Colors" {
goto HLB_Lip
} <GREEN> "Done" {
goto HLB_LipFinish
}

label HLB_LipGloss

        NARRATOR
    What lipstick color would you like?

choice
"Peach" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Peach Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss
} "Light Peach" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Pink Peach Lt Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss
} "Beige Pink" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Pink Beige Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss
} "Medium Pink" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Pink Medium Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss
} "Warm Pink" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Pink Warm Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss
} "Hot Pink" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Pink Hot Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss
} "Deep Pink" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Pink Deep Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss
} "Rose" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Rose Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss
} <GREEN> "Page Two" {
goto HLB_LipGloss2
} <GREEN> "Try Other Colors" {
goto HLB_Lip
} <GREEN> "Done" {
goto HLB_LipFinish
}

label HLB_LipGloss2

        NARRATOR
    What lipstick color would you like?

choice
"Mauve" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Mauve Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss2
} "Pastel Purple" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Purple Pastel Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss2
} "Plum" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Plum Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss2
} "Red" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Red Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss2
} "Deep Red" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Red Deep Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss2
} "Violet" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Violet Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss2
} "Black" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Black Gloss
goto HLB_LipGloss2
} <GREEN> "Page One" {
goto HLB_LipGloss
} <GREEN> "Try Other Colors" {
goto HLB_Lip
} <GREEN> "Done" {
goto HLB_LipFinish
}

label HLB_LipMatte

        NARRATOR
    What lipstick color would you like?

choice
"Peach" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Peach Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte
} "Light Peach" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Pink Peach Light Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte
} "Beige Pink" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Pink Beige Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte
} "Medium Pink" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Pink Medium Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte
} "Warm Pink" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Pink Warm Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte
} "Hot Pink" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Pink Hot Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte
} "Deep Pink" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Pink Deep Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte
} "Rose" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Rose Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte
} <GREEN> "Page Two" {
goto HLB_LipMatte2
} <GREEN> "Try Other Colors" {
goto HLB_Lip
} <GREEN> "Done" {
goto HLB_LipFinish
}

label HLB_LipMatte2

        NARRATOR
    What lipstick color would you like?

choice
"Mauve" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Mauve Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte2
} "Pastel Purple" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Purple Pastel Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte2
} "Plum" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Plum Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte2
} "Red" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Red Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte2
} "Deep Red" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Red Deep Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte2
} "Violet" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Violet Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte2
} "Black" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes mouthColor into Black Matte
goto HLB_LipMatte2
} <GREEN> "Page One" {
goto HLB_LipMatte
} <GREEN> "Try Other Colors" {
goto HLB_Lip
} <GREEN> "Done" {
goto HLB_LipFinish
}

label HLB_LipFinish
        NARRATOR
    Is this the look you're going for?
choice
<GREEN>"Yes, I look perfect!"{
goto HairLipBrows
} "No, let me try a different color."{
goto HLB_Lip
}

label HLB_Brows

        NARRATOR
    What eyebrow shape would you like?

choice
"Arched Natural"{
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrows into Arched Natural
goto HLB_Brows
}"Arched Thick"{
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrows into Arched Thick Styled
goto HLB_Brows
}"Arched Thin"{
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrows into Arched Thin
goto HLB_Brows
}"Arched Thin High"{
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrows into Arched Thin High
goto HLB_Brows
}"Round Medium"{
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrows into Round Medium
goto HLB_Brows
}"Round Thick"{
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrows into Round Thick
goto HLB_Brows
}"Round Thin"{
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrows into Round Thin High
goto HLB_Brows
}"Straight Medium"{
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrows into Straight Medium
goto HLB_Brows
}<GREEN>"Change Color" {
goto HLB_BrowsColor
}<GREEN> "Done"{
goto HLB_BrowFinish
}

label HLB_BrowsColor

        NARRATOR
    Choose your eyebrow color.

choice
"Light Colors" {
goto HLB_BrowsColor_light1
} "Dark Colors" {
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dark1
} "Dyed Colors" {
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dyed1
} <GREEN> "Change Brow Shape" {
goto HLB_Brows
}

label HLB_BrowsColor_light1

        NARRATOR
    Choose your eyebrow color.

choice
"Dirty Blonde" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Dirty Blonde
goto HLB_BrowsColor_light1
} "Honey Blonde" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Honey Blonde
goto HLB_BrowsColor_light1
} "Platinum Blonde" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Platinum Blonde
goto HLB_BrowsColor_light1
} "Strawberry Blonde" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Strawberry Blonde
goto HLB_BrowsColor_light1
} "Blonde Medium" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Blonde Medium
goto HLB_BrowsColor_light1
} "Gray" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Gray
goto HLB_BrowsColor_light1
} <GREEN> "Other Colors" {
goto HLB_BrowsColor
} <GREEN> "Done" {
goto HLB_Brows
}

label HLB_BrowsColor_dark1

        NARRATOR
    Choose your eyebrow color.

choice
"Chestnut Brown" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Chestnut Brown
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dark1
} "Dark Brown" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Dark Brown
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dark1
} "Deep Brown" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Deep Brown
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dark1
} "Light Brown" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Light Brown
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dark1
} "Dark Black" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Black Dark
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dark1
} "Jet Black" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into blackJet
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dark1
} <GREEN> "Other Colors" {
goto HLB_BrowsColor
} <GREEN> "Done" {
goto HLB_Brows
}

label HLB_BrowsColor_dyed1

        NARRATOR
    Choose your eyebrow color.

choice
"Light Pink" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Pink Lt
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dyed1
} "Lavender" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Purple Lilac
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dyed1
} "Mint" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Green Mint
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dyed1
} "Ginger Red" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Ginger Red
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dyed1
} "Copper Red" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into Copper Red
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dyed1
} "White" {
@FEMALEAVATAR changes eyebrowsColor into White
goto HLB_BrowsColor_dyed1
} <GREEN> "Other Colors" {
goto HLB_BrowsColor
} <GREEN> "Done" {
goto HLB_Brows
}


label HLB_BrowFinish
        NARRATOR
    Is this the look you're going for?
choice
<GREEN>"Yes, I look perfect!"{
goto HairLipBrows
} "No, let me try something else."{
goto HLB_Brows
}

label story_continue
#story goes here