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Review for @harly_episode
āBeautiful Broken Liesā
Episode One:
- Very clean directing from the start
- Punctuation and grammar are on point!
- Love how the girls call each other bishes (gotta keep the profanity on the down low in the forums haha)
- The sass and sarcasm between the three friends is something I live for - the banter and dynamic they all have is brilliant
- Elenaās narrative is matter-of-fact and very concise, you get straight to the point.
- Personally, I do like a story when the beginning is when someone is going through the future consequence then goes back to tell the story - the whole āthis is where it all beganāā¦
- Again, on Elenaās narrative, it felt as if I was in her head - her thoughts and feelings were realistic and felt very natural
- Your writing style is on point because you made your characters likable/unlikable from the offset which for me is a sign of good writing
- Typically, mean girls stress me out in stories lol but you made Elena and her friends likable with their sass and adding dimensions as well as complexity to their characters (btw I wanna rip out those cheap extensions from Cassieās hair too girl
) - Directing is brilliant and the way Cassie entered the school like she runs the place, loved how you wrote that!
- The character points and the fact that choices matter is so good, I donāt mind if there are not many choices tbh because I live for a strong plot! Quality not quantity was the case here
- OMG Lydiaās coffee choice - loved it!
Episode Two:
- The party scene is well-directed and love how you added background characters which makes scenes a lot more realistic, the effort really pays off.
- Feel like thereās a lot more to Cassie than meets the eye - she seems shady hmm
- The plot is yes! By that I mean I love the suspense, the romance, the drama! Love. It.
- When Jake walks back into the party there is a slight layering issue when he comes back to the party (after being wasted in the bathroom) - a BG character is over him if that makes sense.
- Phoenix is Mr Mysterious and love how you were descriptive but not too descriptive, you gave enough to explain how Elena is feeling but not overwhelming us with flowery words
Episode Three:
- Again, really good directing and itās very engaging
- Not many comments because I was way too into the plot haha but now I gotta wait and find out who the person in the skeleton suit isā¦
Overall Comments:
This story gave me a Pretty Little Liars vibe and the high school drama vibe which I do like - the plot is suspenseful, drama-filled and a hint of romance. This is a great story, it is well-written and I loved reading it. You two have done amazingly 
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Oh my gosh! Thank you so much, this review is so amazing 
We will have a look at the error in episode 2! We will do your review as soon as we can, we have a few others to do first xx
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Hey, and no problem! Btw I donāt need a review, and super glad you guys introduced this story to me. I loved it so much!
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Awww thank you, this means so muchš x
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Review for @TheBigMystery
āFantastical: Regnum Fortesā
Episode One:
- From the beginning, so the splashes and cover art are brilliant
- Also, good use of advanced directing with the font and CC is a major plus point for some readers so thatās great
- Wow, this is a very interactive story - youāve spoiled the reader with so many choices and the music is brilliant
- The storytelling is really good very engaging, the use of different colours for the words made me happy too haha (as you can tell I am quite a fan of visual effects )
- Typically, I am not a fan of fantasy, however, if I find that the realm the writer has written is believable I find it quite engaging! I found this to be the case with this story, youāve made a beautiful little universe and darn it is beautiful!
- Love the character points and the fact they affect whether or not we will get to a love interestās ending - choices have an impact on the overall story which is great and adds to the interactive element of the story!
- Brilliant overlays Your directing is on point and is advanced, loving it so far!
- The sarcasm and humour is my cup of tea (my Britishness gets strength from it haha)
- WOAH! The Xylon VS Felix combat scene haha, I am going to constantly say it but your directing skills are just so good! I am anticipating some brilliant combat scenes in this story!
- Your writing style is great - I love the characters, the love interests (I am taking a liking to Xylon haha) and the world youāve made is evidently well thought out as well as interesting.
Episode Two:
- HOLY GUACAMOLE! Fionaās āDROP AND GIVE ME TWENTYā made me jump. Haha, never knew an Episode story could startle me (achievement unlocked) and rather the twins than me doing that training, it looked intense - very realistic and had a military vibe to it!
- The fireball! Wow! (The effort you have put into this story shows, the hard work has produced a stunning result)
- The combat scenes are beautifully directed
- The story is so aesthetically pleasing and Iām glad thereās substance, itās not just a pretty story but thereās a strong plot too
- Wow, that plot twist though! It explains a lot in regards to the twins!
-An exhilarating episode to read!
Episode Three:
- I like how this episode gave the reader an opportunity to get to know the characters and gain some points.
- This episode is quite light (less action than usual) which I like, it is still brilliantly directed and written very nicely!
- Again, that plot twist though!
Overall Comments:
A visually-pleasing story with a brilliant plot and has all the ingredients for an awesome episode story: awesome directing, amazing plot and is very interactive. Itās very clear a lot of hard work has been done for this story to be produced and my goodness it shows. What a treat to read!
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Review for @Davidcrvz
āLGBT Finding Myselfā
Episode One:
- I love the simplicity of your splashes and use of sound!
- CC and name choice is a plus point for some readers, it really helps the story become more interactive!
- Woah, the eye colour change! Some grammatical issues e.g. āBut I stab himā should be āBut I stabbed himā.
- Lovely use of custom backgrounds and use of own overlays as well.
- Good use of transitions and zooms as well and the plot is quite interesting so far. Iām curious about how MCās eye colour changes will affect how MC will behave further on in the story.
- Itās very sad that the MCās parents died and I do hope she (my MC is female) will be able to avenge her parents but doesnāt lose herself in the end.
- Itās a very cool idea that the eye colour change affects the morality of the MC.
Episode Two:
- Haha, good use of the ācamera shakeā for when MC sisterās screamed!
- The exploration of morality when seeking revenge is very interesting (youāre talking to my Ethics brain - I used to study Philosophy & Ethics so I love the theme of the plot!)
- Ooh, interesting, the reader can choose what kind of morality the MC will have with their choices and using a points system!
- Choices definitely matter here! So I need to think carefully haha to see what kind of morality I will have!
- Quick tip, at the end of each piece of dialogue, there should be punctuation marks (I forget this but some people whoāve reviewed my stories have commented on that)
- Great use of sound, and love how it is an important part of the plot!
- Haha, love how the fart gave her away to Kyle in the forest!
Episode Three:
- At the beginning when Kyle and MC are talking to each other, Kyle is not in the zone he was in before and instead with the MC - they are on top of each other instead.
- Wow, the MC is very skilled with the knife - this might come in handy later in the story I think
- Good directing, again good use of overlays and zooms!
- What an ending to episode three! I wonder who Linda isā¦?
Overall Comments:
Directing is good - great use of overlays and I still find the whole eye colour change thing awesome. This story has an interesting plot and I like how interactive it was as well as giving choices which gave points! Hope this review helps 
Wow! Thanks so much for this awesome review!! Iām so glad you liked it!! 
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Hello,
Thank you @Days for this thread. I hope you always accept stories 
I am 22 and I live in France so, know that English isnāt my first langage. And if you want to chat with me, donāt hesitate to contact me 
Title: Switch Psyche
Author: Sicy Ricci
Episodes: 1-5 (ongoing)
Genre: Fantasy ~ Action ~ Friendship ~ Drama ~ Comic ~ And a little bit of Love (seems like a real explosive mixture) 
Description: How will you react when your beloved ex-boyfriend who crushed your heart a few years ago, wants you to be dead ? Ancient forces are awaken to protect the world from a new threat.
Social Media: @sicyricci.episode on Instagram
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This sounds like a great read - Iāll check it out and Iāll review the first three episodes for you
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Thank you so much <3
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Want to do mine please?
Story title: The Guy Next Door
Author: Rawda
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4662277465047040
Limeligth
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Review for @Sicy_Ricci
āSwitch Psycheā
Episode One:
- I love your splash - itās simplistic but very lovely and has a quote which I am sure is relevant to the plot is a lovely touch!
- The directing so far is very clean and good use of sound/music, itās not excessive and is appropriate to the story!
- The writing is gorgeous, great description and the narrative is well-written - it really speaks to me at times as I have a soft spot for Philosophy! (Jade talking to Manon about superstition)
- Great use of filters to show which scenes are flashbacks
- I like the dynamic between Manon and Jade is with its support & care as well as banter
- Also, itās brilliant that you have more than POV/perspective - the reader really gets the chance to be inside of the characterās heads.
- Great use of transitions to keep the story going smoothly
- Wow, Jade has literally gone into the place of her nightmares!
- Haha, good cliffhanger. I want to know now who was chuckling - nice way to end the first episode!
- Personally, I do not mind if there are not many choices or even none - what I do mind is a plot I find engaging and this story provides an intriguing as well as unique plot
Episode Two:
- Again, love the use of a quote at the beginning of the episode!
- Your directing is brilliant, you use advanced directing skills and use them very well!
- Also, Jadeās special gift is so interesting - Iām curious if Manon were to find out, how sheād react to Jadeās ability to foresee events as Manon is a skeptic from what Iāve seen and for her to see physical evidence of someone with psychic powers so to speak would be intriguing)
- Forgot to mention, the backgrounds are brilliant - I felt as if I were seeing things from Jadeās eyes when the room started to whirl more and more
Episode Three:
- I love how complex your characters are like Matt who seems like a conflicted individual at times as you can see he still has feelings for Jade but thereās definite resentment too, he blames her for his suffering.
- It was interesting to see what happened from Mattās eyes as well as Jadeās eyes even if what Matt saw seemed to be in his head - clever exploration of the psyche!
- Ah what a twist, there are vampires in this story haha AND GREG!? Now, that was a surprise!
- Directing is on point and very good
- Your episodes have ended at good points from what I have read so far - whether it would be a cliffhanger or a shock reveal.
General Comments:
The philosophical and psychological undertones of this story are amazing as well as the description and overall plot which is very unique as well as interesting. TrĆØs bien!
Hey, Iād love to read your story. Iāll make a review on it tomorrow if thatās alright 
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Hi days,
Thank you for your feedback although I already change some grammar issue donāt know why it didnāt appear and I will keep in mind some suggestions you have. Thanks for giving my story a try
Ah that may have been a problem with my phone but ignore what I said about grammar haha then. Great read
Hi! Iād love to exchange reviews with you.
My story is called Revival.
Heres the description!
The story is about Lillian Hayes, who is a professional criminal in a futuristic society. Lillian lives at The Circle, a home for thieves and rebels who resist the new dictatorship government. Love, family drama, action and plot twists; find it all in Revival!
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Instagram: episode__grace
Style: Ink
Author: Grace
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4762507897602048
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