Generally, I am doing a no returns kinda thing with the reviews but that is extremely kind of you! 
Sounds like an interesting story and I’ll review it tomorrow along with @lou.episode’s story!
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Thank you so much!
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Ooh I am intrigued - cannot wait to sink my teeth into this story (sorry!) 
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Haha punderful!
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Review for @lou.episode
“Puppy Love”
Episode One:
- The splashes look super nice!
- Ooh, I like how our choices will affect the length of the story - brilliant idea!
- Wow, I love the use of overlays and your directing is really amazing!
- Haha, I am a sucker for comedic effects and your use of the text effects really help emphasise certain points
- I love your sense of humour - it talks to my soul
- Aw, I love that the puppy’s POV is narrated as well - nice to see things from the pet’s perspective too.
- Great use of background characters to make the scenes look more realistic and the overall dialogue is really great so far (comical and naturally flowing)
- YAS! That kick though! Your directing is so good!!!
- I love how much of an impact the reader’s choices make in the story (sounds like hard work but it has definitely paid off!)
- Brilliant custom backgrounds and great use of transitions helping the story go smoothly!
- Love that the puppy’s POV is realistic - I could definitely imagine a puppy’s thoughts being just like that!
- I like how you gradually reveal facts about the characters and that I am being reeled in (especially when Mike and Gianna meeting each other again and I had been wondering what do they mean to each other).
- Great use of sound and music - it is very purposeful within the story and enhances the overall reading experience.
- At the end of your story, you’d noted that this is your first story and wow, I’m really impressed - I am loving what I have read so far. Also, you’d mention there’s no CC - in a story, I really don’t mind if there’s no CC
Episode Two:
- I love the opening part of the episodes - the little intro is nicely done!
- I like the use of a special art seen when showing Alli’s transformation and wow, this is definitely a creative plot haha
- Haha, love that Alli lacks self-awareness (for now at least) and is still a puppy at heart - very clever!
- Also, it’s good to see how realistic Jason’s reaction is to Alli - this is a very unusual thing to happen and it would not just make sense for him to be like “Oh hai Alli” so loving the realistic nature of the story despite the surreal plot.
- Again, brilliant directing so far and engaging plot as well as great overlays!
- I like how the author has a quick chat with the reader at the end too - it helps answer some questions for some readers.
Episode Three:
- Haha, I know that Jason’s reaction is realistic but when Alli first transformed. I wanted to grab Jason by the shoulders and shake him just saying “IT’S ALLI, DAMN IT”
AH darn, I had to cut my review short because I have some stuff to do -_- If I get back to it today, I’ll carry on where I left off but I am really enjoying it so far!
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…hey I have returned!!!
So for Episode Three:
- Love the plot and the overall directing is on point
- I was really into the story and I love your author chats at the end - they are super cute!
- It is a very unique plot and found it very fun to read. Love how it is literally about puppy love.
Overall Comments:
Fun and well directed story. With great humour and beautiful overlays. Well done and it was a pleasure to read! 
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Hey @Days, Thank you! 
I’m so glad you enjoyed reading it! And don’t worry Chris gets better as the story continue! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story. This really has motivated me to continue writing.
Have an amazing day!!! 
-TD
Ah I am so glad you’ll continue writing because you’re doing so well and super happy to know Chris gets better because I have developed a bit of a soft spot for him
Gosh! I’m literally smiling the whole time I’m reading your review. 
Thank you so much!!!
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Awww yay!!!
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Review for @SteeleMagnolia
“To Love and Be Loved”
Episode One:
- Firstly, you noted that the MC is older and it’s a bit emo - honestly, that if perfectly fine
- The bond between Lauren and her father is evident from the beginning, they seem very close to each other as shown during the celebration dinner (good writing has shown that)!
- Great directing so far and it is well-written (grammar, spelling, etc. as well as the vocabulary is very good).
- I found it pretty engaging and the directing is well done as well
- The exchange between the crush and Lauren was really cute and I loved how you added in the choices of what was Evan’s surname (good way to check if we are paying attention haha)
- Also, what a way to end the chapter and brilliantly tactful use of sound!
Episode Two:
- I like how you’ve captured the life of an adult starting out in the big world very well - it’s realistically written!
- Woaaaahhhh! Ari’s friend is Mr Cute! I love it!
- Any facts you mention in your story are well-researched and well-stated as well.
- I was pretty into it so far. Not sure, if it was just me but there were awkward silences between Ari and Lauren (very realistic way to show what it can be like when you first meet someone)
- Directing’s pretty good too.
Episode Three:
- So, the overall episode was quite an interesting insight into Evan.
- Liked that Lauren was quite flirtatious as was Evan. Loved their chemistry!
- The dialogue was natural and flowed very well as well as being quite realistic.
- Again, great use of sound and the directing was pretty good as well.
Overall Comments:
I feel like this story appeals more to a mature audience as the main character is in the early stages of “adulting” but I liked that it was very realistic, quite an emotional story which was nice. It was a good read and the directing is well done!
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Hi there! I just updated my first few episodes and would love to know how they are!
Story: In Too Deep
Author: Sweet Stories
Genre:Fantasy
Description: After being rescued by a mysterious stranger, you get thrown into his world. Unfortunately for you it’s a world you aren’t supposed to know about. Will your choices save lives?
Reading this review made me so happy. All the things you talked about, including the awkwardness between Lauren and Ari, were what I was trying to portray. I’m glad that my intentions came across. It gives me a lot of confidence in my writing! I mean… I write for a living, but not THIS kind of writing. It’s been a fun challenge and it is nice to know I’m on the right track. THANK YOU!!!
Sadly, I didn’t have to research the parts you are talking about. This is based on a true story, and while I’ve taken liberties in the latter chapters of the stories, the dad character and his story are pretty true to life.
Hey, as I far as I have seen you make such helpful and amazing reviews. I’d be honored if you’d like review my first story Last Dance!
I’m so sorry to hear that you haven’t had to research those parts of the story and I give you all my love. I am also happy to hear that my review made you happy
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Hey, I’d love to check your story out soon and thanks
Ooh, this sounds interesting! I’ll check it out soon
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Review for @daniepisodewriter
“Darkness”
Episode One:
- Woah, the splash at the beginning with the blood dripping is amazing!
- The use of music is really good and love the custom backgrounds you used!
- So far, the narration is really good - I didn’t feel the need to tap quickly through it so you’re keeping the reader engaged.
- From what I have seen. the directing is really good and advanced as well.
- Brilliant use of zooms and I love the dynamic between the MC & Violet.
- Love how witty Victoria is and she seems pretty badass too like not being a damsel in distress but instead she is saving herself from McCreep back there.
- Also, love how relatable the dialogue is (if that makes sense - I like how people bounce off of what the other person has said)
- Really good use of overlays and you’re right - definitely not your cliche vampire story (thank God because that would have sucked
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Episode Two:
- Wow, I like that the vampires have white eyes and pale skin - great indicator to tell us who is a mere mortal and who’s a blood sucker!
- The directing is really good and the overall plot is very intriguing.
- I love how technical your directing is and the storyline as well as writing is really good!
- Love the little detail of having no reflection in the mirror at the bathroom!
- Quick point, it’s very minor but when Alice says she is teaching Victoria how to fight and how to take blood without “killing” someone rather than “kill”.
Sorry again, I had to cut this review short - I have some stuff to do and I’ll be busy tomorrow as well. So, during the weekend or if I can sneak it in tomorrow, I’ll finish your review as well as the other ones too. Not a fan of constantly cutting my reviews short but life haha.
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QUICK ANNOUNCEMENT:
Still feel free to request reviews, but they may take a while to come through and so sorry if I’ve had to cut your review short.
All my love to you guys! 
Hi! So, I’m new to Episode, and this is my first story on this kind of platform, so feedback from an experienced user would be super awesome!
My story is a vampire romance set in a fantasy world that…is shooting for a more medieval time period, but due to outfit options probably doesn’t always hit that mark XD
The first two episodes are totally done, but I’m currently working on Episode 3 so it’s…decidedly not done. Like, some scenes look good, but others…well, you’ll see.
Thank you in advance for doing this!