So, here’s my critique…
- As for the directing… dude, I LOVE IT. LOOL.
- Anyways, one problem though, i think you switched talon with wilder. Bc i clicked wilder and the guy with the cropped hair showed up instead of the other. When you click the “picture of talon” option, wilder shows up instead and vice versa. Maybe check into that!
- Other than that, the story has the sense of humor that I absolutely love!
- The direction of the story was flawless, and I’ll def be reading more because seldom do you find a story with decent direction, grammar and humor! Great job
