i need help Describing my billionaire LI
this is him
this is my current dialogue
I looked over at the boss.
He looked dangerous.
He was wearing a black suit.
He looked like every girls dream.
He has a scar on his cheek.
I wonder how that happened.
Did someone hurt him?
Our eyes locked
What about something like
I glanced over at the boss.
He was every girls dream.
His black suit was perfectly fitted and made him look mysterious and dangerous.
The scar on his cheek made me curious, how did it happen? Had someone hurt him?
What you have is good so I just reworded it a little bit.
I tried lol
I glanced over at him.
The boss.
There’s this dangerous yet mysterious aura coming from him.
He looked like a dark, sophisticated knight from every girl’s princess dream.
And yet, the scar on his cheek piques my curiosity.
What happened to him?
Did someone hurt him?
Just when realisation/realization hits me, our eyes met.
