hey !
this is my description for my first story (not out yet) can you give me a feedback ?
In Greenland high school, students have a talent for solve a case.
Harley can’t already deals with boys stuff but what’s happened when a mysterious group of murderer will appear ?
and if i made some mistakes feel free to correct me english isn’t my first language
(sneek peak and trailer already on instagram greenland.episode and sorry for the promote 
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Hi I think the idea of it is amazing but there are some grammatical errors in the second sentence 
At Greenland high school, students have a talent for solving cases.
Harley already can’t deal with boy stuff, but what happens when a mysterious group of murderers appear?
Will this work? :))
tysm !
ommmg yea tysm <3
you’re welcome!! <33
It sounds a little bit like another story, but other than that it sounds good!
Oh really ? what’s the story ?
The inspiration is from :
H&V : Levity AND Assasins of blackwood (for the high school idea just I made it with the talents)
Death the girl AND an old story in 2018 i don’t remeber the name (for the talents idea)
and a lot of mystery story (for the groups of murderers )
assassins of blackwood is my fav story 
Eheh my fav is death the girl but it’s one of my fav too
It sounds a little bit like Rivals. But, different so it’s good!
Oh yea the description sounds like her story I didn’t even think about it.
thanks <3
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