Description Help Needed! Please!

Does this description:
Anna became broken after watching her mother die, and to top that off she got abused. Now, Anna must find a way to adapt to her new home and family.

Fit this title: Save Me

Or these covers:

If not, is anyone willing to help me improve it?

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@JemU776

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I like it, but I don;t think it fits that well…
Idk if this fits either, but I’ll give it a try
Description: Anna is someone who has been the victim of the lost of a loved one. She has been threw things including being abused. Will she make out, will she survive. She wants to be saved, so will she.

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The desc is fine but the last part is confusing.

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Maybe instead of that it could say
All she want is to be saved. The question is Will she?

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Anna is someone who has been the victim of the lost of a loved one. She has been threw things including being abused. All she want is to be saved. The questions is Will she?

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I agree!

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OMG! That’as awesome! I’ll def consider it!

Are you available to continue on the group chat? Just wondering

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Thx!

I will reply back now

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:smile:

Anna lives in a solitary world that no one enters or understands. As delicate and beautiful as her mother, she is shunned by a world that misinterprets her affliction. How will she find herself under the broken pieces of her past?
Pretty sure this is too long, but just an option!

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Anna, a child who was abused, sat and watched as her mothers life was slowly taken away from her. Now, Anna must find a way to adapt to her new life. But is that as easy as it sounds?
Just an idea…

Not to be impatient, but I went to the chat and didn’t see reply. Sorry if I seem impatient,I’m just super bored.

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It’s cool!

That one is amazing :heart:

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Thank you! I love writing descriptions :smile:

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After the loss of her mother and being abused, Anna now has to adapt to living with a new family. Will she survive or will you need to be saved!

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I’ll deferentially put it in my possibilities list! Thanks Cam!

(Not sure which suggestion I’ll use, because I want the BEST possible one.)

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Hi