Description Help Needed

Hello all!

So, for my story I am giving it a makeover and I want to ensure I make it as attractive as possible.

Therefore, I am producing a poll seeing which description attracts your attention.

Description One:

Mindy’s life was filled with joy and laughter but haunted by heartbreak. All that changes when she meets Derek. Will he be able to mend her broken heart?

Description Two:

Mindy’s life is full of joy and laughter but is haunted by heartbreak. What happens when Derek comes crashing into her life changing the way she sees love?

Description Three:

You’re going to a breakup and you don’t know how to move on. Everything changes when you meet Derek. Who is he? How can you learn to trust again?

Maybe you have your own suggestions? If you wish to provide your own suggestion you are free to do so.

  • Description One
  • Description Two
  • Description Three

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The first one!

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Thanks general consensus seems to be the first one! I will opt for it and thanks for voting!

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The third one will give you more reads, as it is from the reader’s perspective and the reader will be like “oh yeah it means I have significance in this story”.

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Thanks very much for responding! A lovely friend had thought up of a really nice description for me as well!

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