Description! Help!

Here is the description of my story!

Katy is a sweet girl. She meets a mysterious bad boy. They cross paths. But what happens when someone goes missing!

Is this good or should I change it!

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I feel this is too vague and cliche, maybe say something like this:

When Katy crosses paths with a mysterious stranger, many abnormal events seem to occur… what will she do when someone goes missing?

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:hushed: :open_mouth:
OMG I LOVE IT! Ok like what the heck. You are so creative! You know what to name my story, what to put in the description! Lots of love :heart:

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Thank you so much AWW!! :sob::smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I’ve had a ton of experience with this stuff, so I love helping people out!! :revolving_hearts:

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I will give you credit too!
Thanks girl!

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No need to boo! No problem!

Waitttttttttttttttttttt it has to be 120 characters! It’s to long!

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Hold on I’ll shorten it babe!! :revolving_hearts:

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Try this! Worked on mine :slight_smile:

When Katy crosses paths with a mysterious stranger, many abnormal events seem to occur. What’ll she do when someone goes missing?

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Thanks boo!

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No problemo!

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When Katy meets a mysterious stranger, who just so happens to be the opposite of her sweet demenor, what will happen? And then someone is missing. Gone in the blink of an eye. What happened? Will Katy ever find out?

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It has to be 120 characters :sweat_smile:

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Ok, well, you can shorten it if you’d like.

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