Description needed (help please) (poll)

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#1

Hello, I was told I needed to have a better description/blurb for my story.

Right now, it is Sophie is murdered can she go back in time to stop the deed.

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Later on we find out it was by her twin who they thought had died at birth

  • Birth, live and death , should be the cycle of life. But when someone tries to change the death with murder , can you stop him?
  • Sophie has been murdered and she can go back in time to stop the deed. Will she uncover who did it and other dark secrets?
  • He holds the gun
    Against my head
    I close my eyes and
    Bang , I am dead
  • Other
  • Mixture

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#2

Plot by @24aya


#3

You don’t need to mention it everywhere man :upside_down_face: I am happy that you are working on this idea :wink:


#4

Oh…and I find this quote maybe you can use it… because I am bad with description :sweat_smile:
He holds the gun
Against my head
I close my eyes and
Bang , I am dead

Or not😅


#5

Thank You who said the quote?


#6

Sophie has been murdered and she can go back in time to stop the deed. Will she uncover who did it and other dark secrets?

Lol sorry I am so bad at descriptions haha


#7

Aurora Aksnes


#8

OOh thank you


#9

And days make me think of…
Birth, live and death , should be the cycle of life. But when someone tries to change the death with murder , can you stop him?
:expressionless:I am bad with description :no_mouth:


#10

Thank you


#11

Totes man :upside_down_face:


#12

Updated


#13

@Jeremy close


#14

Why am I getting “Happy Death Day” vibes? :thinking:


#15