Hello, I was told I needed to have a better description/blurb for my story.
Right now, it is Sophie is murdered can she go back in time to stop the deed.
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Later on we find out it was by her twin who they thought had died at birth
Birth, live and death , should be the cycle of life. But when someone tries to change the death with murder , can you stop him?
Sophie has been murdered and she can go back in time to stop the deed. Will she uncover who did it and other dark secrets?
He holds the gun
Against my head
I close my eyes and
Bang , I am dead
Other
Mixture
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24aya
September 19, 2018, 3:52pm
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You donât need to mention it everywhere man I am happy that you are working on this idea
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24aya
September 19, 2018, 4:02pm
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OhâŠand I find this quote maybe you can use it⊠because I am bad with description
He holds the gun
Against my head
I close my eyes and
Bang , I am dead
Or notđ
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Thank You who said the quote?
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Days
September 19, 2018, 4:25pm
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Sophie has been murdered and she can go back in time to stop the deed. Will she uncover who did it and other dark secrets?
Lol sorry I am so bad at descriptions haha
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24aya
September 19, 2018, 4:27pm
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And days make me think ofâŠ
Birth, live and death , should be the cycle of life. But when someone tries to change the death with murder , can you stop him?
I am bad with description
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Why am I getting âHappy Death Dayâ vibes?
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