Description needed (help please) (poll)

Hello, I was told I needed to have a better description/blurb for my story.

Right now, it is Sophie is murdered can she go back in time to stop the deed.

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Later on we find out it was by her twin who they thought had died at birth

  • Birth, live and death , should be the cycle of life. But when someone tries to change the death with murder , can you stop him?
  • Sophie has been murdered and she can go back in time to stop the deed. Will she uncover who did it and other dark secrets?
  • He holds the gun
    Against my head
    I close my eyes and
    Bang , I am dead
  • Other
  • Mixture

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Plot by @24aya

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You don’t need to mention it everywhere man :upside_down_face: I am happy that you are working on this idea :wink:

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Oh…and I find this quote maybe you can use it… because I am bad with description :sweat_smile:
He holds the gun
Against my head
I close my eyes and
Bang , I am dead

Or not😅

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Thank You who said the quote?

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Sophie has been murdered and she can go back in time to stop the deed. Will she uncover who did it and other dark secrets?

Lol sorry I am so bad at descriptions haha

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Aurora Aksnes

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OOh thank you

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And days make me think of…
Birth, live and death , should be the cycle of life. But when someone tries to change the death with murder , can you stop him?
:expressionless:I am bad with description :no_mouth:

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Thank you

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Totes man :upside_down_face:

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Updated

@Jeremy close

Why am I getting “Happy Death Day” vibes? :thinking:

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