I’d probably be more likely to read #1, as long as it had a few more commas. Unless you need space for other stuff, you’ve got enough character limit left for 2 more commas.
“Until you were cursed, you believed your bad luck wouldn’t win. Doomed to a race against time, fears, and the Devil, you have to save several souls, including your broken one.”
#2 is still good, though. 