Detailed Reviews, and Tips on How You Could Improve


#1

Hi there, I’m Yasemin, and I want to review your stories, with detail. The things I will be basing my review on are:
GRAMMAR/SENTENCE STRUCTURE/ SPELLING
DIVERSITY
SPOT DIRECTING
COVER QUALITY
DESCRIPTION QUALITY
CHOICES
PLOT LINE
DIALOGUE

Fill out this form: https://goo.gl/forms/UiQ2WKyNLsQRHnNl1

I also will give you advice on how to improve your story :wink: !


#2

Hi, Yasemin!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

Form submitted.

:blue_heart::blue_heart::blue_heart:


#3

Submitted. Thank you so much! :wink:

~ Winter xx


#4

Hello!!!
I submitted 2 forms if you don’t mind.:smile:
Hope I did good, and thank you!!


#5

Done! :blush::black_heart:


#6

I submitted my info. Thank you for your help.


#7

Hello there, @epiisode.yassmin!

I just submitted a form.

Thank you for your time and I hope you’ll like my story.

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#8

Submitted :slight_smile:


#9

This is so nice you are doing this. I submitted a request and thank you in advance.


#10

Submitted :slight_smile:


#11

Hi! Thank you for creating this thread! I would love it if you could review my story!
Here’s my story:
Name: Girl Of Deception
Description: Aria Lamar has is all. She’s rich, beautiful and smart. But she’s an arrogant jerk and has no compassion. Little does she know that’s all about to change.
Genre: Adventure
Btw: My cover is different, this one is being approved by episode at the moment.


#12

HEY!!:grin:

HERE’S THE INFO!!

Story Name: DEMIGODDESS

Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally. CC

Small Cover:
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Large Cover:
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LINK:


#13

Can you please PM me the review.

Send me a fanmail once you read my story :grin:.

Title of the story : Trail Of Tears
Name of the author : Cindy
Story genre : Drama/Romance
Description : A girl who goes through a lot in her life. Some days are good and some days are bad she wants to just be a normal girl that does not have to run away from her problems. CC
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5548954080247808
Style : Ink
Episodes : 16