Detailed reviews ( at least three chapters)



Hey there! :raising_hand_woman:t5:

I have a lot of story passes and time on my hands, so here’s what I’m offering. If you read a chapter or more of my story, I will read three chapters of yours, complete with a specific, constructive review (reasons I liked/didn’t like it, ways you can improve, etc).

Please note you have to read mine first (remember, I’m asking for one chapter minimum) and private message me a screenshot as proof of your reading. Feedback is also accepted and appreciated. If you’d just like a read without a review, that’s fine too. Be sure to tell me in your message. :slight_smile:

My story details are:

Title: Camouflaged Intentions
Author: Damini A.
Genre: Mystery/Drama
Description: Stella has led a very unoriginal life until now–when a party, a gun, and a loaded question make everything go crazy.

I look forward to reading your creations!


I’ll read your story now, and please read mine.

I hope you like my story~

Story Title: Rivals [Limelight]
Author Name: Winter05
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight (in the title, lol)
Story Description: You are fighting to win your father’s trust to be handed down the family business. That’s pretty hard with your rival company’s boss’s hot son. Will you come out victorious?
Episodes Released: 4 (ongoing)

Winter x


@daniepisodewriter @WinterMoon05

Both of your stories look great. I will get right on them as soon as I receive your messages :slight_smile:


TITLE: Returns
Author: Raniksa STORIES
GENRE: Romance
Description: Oriana is coming back home for a reason, but demons of her past are getting her harder than she could ever imagine. !


Here’s my story - I’ll start reading yours as soon as I can!

Title: Scandalous
Author: Mina
Genre: Drama/mystery
Description: After the murder of her best friend, Catalina starts uncovering secrets that make her question everything she thought she knew, and clues that could lead her to the killer before they strike again.

Thank you so much!


@dede2797 Sent you a message. :wink:


Hi! :blush:

Author: Cribb
Genre: Drama
Description: Cleo’s life changes right before her departure for Spain. Will this holiday help her to forget, or everything will get worse?
No one can be trusted.

I will read your story asap :blush:


@cribb @Raniksa

Hey there! I will read and review your stories as soon as I get your messages.


Hey everyone, I just wrote a story and I’m hoping for you guys to give it a read.
I only published 5 episodes but I will publish more in a few days.
Here are the details for it:
Author: feck.b
Category: action/adventure
Description: She runs in tears, bumping into a “school friend” stabbing someone. Forced to join in a British gang,What Will Haunt Her Now?

This story also uses East London slang.


I’ll read and review your story if and when you read mine and private message me a screenshot as proof. :slight_smile:


Dang that cover looks amazing! Where’d you get that?



Heyo! I just released my first EPISODE book ever! : D : D I’m super excited!
H & V: The Smoke that Separates us .
It’s a drama, psychological journey that takes you through the eyes of the main character and his life after he decided not to smoke, everything seemed to go okay but then something happened at a famly lunch that will change his life forever…

Have fun reading!


This is my story. I’ll send you a message when I read yours. :blush:

TITLE: The Exchange Student
STYLE: Limelight
DESCRIPTION: You’re an exchange student but what happens if your host family is the most popular and richest family in town?
AUTHOR: triblue


I have my story here. Please do review on mine too. Thanks a lot!!! <3

P.S. it is not really all wolves and vampires there’s more to it so stay tuned
Story: Unexpected You
Genre: Romance/Action/Fantasy
Author: Haneen
Teaser: A girl who thought her junior year would be normal as she expected to be. It turns out there are a lot of unexpected events happening in her life. Will she survive? Who is her man?


Thank you! And I made it myself with photoshop lol


@haneenmae25 @Res @Triblue

I’d love to review your stories. Waiting on your messages!



Please go read my first story.

I would appreciate that, I will read yours also.

Thank you,


I’ll read yours now. :two_hearts::two_hearts:


Title: The Broken Circle Of Graduate’s Diary
Author: Inas shanouha.
Genre: Adventure
Description: A young girl who graduated before finding a job and so anxious of unknown and how she’ll face friend-love-work dilemma?


I sent you a dm in insta xD