Dialogue Help ASAP

I need help in a dialogue scene:
So the MC has made friends with two girls and they are friends with these popular “bad boys” and one of the boys is the love interest and he always with the Mean girl and the mean girl basically uses the love interest as a boy toy. The Mean girl and Love interest comes out the janitors closet and sees the MC and feels threatened by her and calls the girls losers.

So basically I need help with a dialogue so it doesn’t sound cheesy

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I can help, I’ll PM you!