Directing Story Help!

Heres my code: please help me fix it!

sound car_crash
@transition fade out white in 2
EXT. CAR CRASH - DAY
&YOU enters from left to screen center
@YOU changes into YOU_casual
&YOU is idle_fallen AND YOU faces right AND YOU spot 0.612 -46 196 in zone 1
&MOM enters from left to screen center
&MOM is sleep_uncomfortable AND MOM faces right AND MOM spot 0.612 435 200 in zone 1
@pan to zone 4 in 0
@transition fade in white in 2
@pan to zone 1 in 8
@speechbubble is 203 108 to 79% with tail_bottom_right
YOU (talk_neutral_lay_exhausted)
M-mom? No… Mom…
NARRATOR
Pause.

whats the error ?

or what is the problem? @BrookeTurner

@BrookeTurner: sleep_uncomfortable isn’t a proper animation :slightly_smiling_face:.
Let me know if this helped!

I’ve tried a whole bunch of different ways with it. It ends up panning their, but YOU is offscreen somehow and MOM is standing. It’s hard to explain. Just try putting it in your code

sound car_crash
@transition fade out white in 2
EXT. CAR CRASH - DAY
@cut to zone 4
@YOU changes into YOU_casual
&YOU spot .612 -46 196 in zone 1 THEN YOU faces right AND YOU starts idle_fallen
&MOM spot .612 435 200 in zone 1 THEN MOM faces right AND MOM starts sleep_uncomfortable
@transition fade in white in 2
@pan to zone 1 in 8
@speechbubble is 203 108 to 79% with tail_bottom_right
YOU (talk_neutral_lay_exhausted)
M-mom? No… Mom…
NARRATOR
Pause.

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ty!!

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